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I am writing to inform you that I am unable to do so owing to some engagements at work

I am writing to inform you that I am unable to do so owing to some engagements at work NwKab

Dear Ms. Smirth, I am Luc who rented your department situated on 113A River Side Street and I was supposed to move in on 1st September, however, I am writing to inform you that I am unable to do so owing to some engagements at work. My family already prepared everything completely to move into the new department, unfortunately, yesterday evening, I suddenly received my company’s delegation to attend the workshop. I could not refuse this offering from my managers because this is a great opportunity to get a higher promotion. I will be back only on the 12th of September. Once I get back from there, I will take a few days off to get ready for the move. Therefore, I believe I can move into your place on 16th September. I hope you wouldn’t mind my taking longer to move in. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, LUC nguyen

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Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely
,

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