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I am writing to inform you that I am unable to do so owing to some engagements at work

I am writing to inform you that I am unable to do so owing to some engagements at work NwKab
Dear Ms. Smirth, I am Luc who rented your department situated on 113A River Side Street and I was supposed to move in on 1st September, however, I am writing to inform you that I am unable to do so owing to some engagements at work. My family already prepared everything completely to move into the new department, unfortunately, yesterday evening, I suddenly received my company’s delegation to attend the workshop. I could not refuse this offering from my managers because this is a great opportunity to get a higher promotion. I will be back only on the 12th of September. Once I get back from there, I will take a few days off to get ready for the move. Therefore, I believe I can move into your place on 16th September. I hope you wouldn’t mind my taking longer to move in. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, LUC nguyen
Dear Ms.
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Smirth
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I am
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Luc
who rented your department situated on 113A River Side
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Street and
I
was supposed
to
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move
in on 1st September,
however
, I am writing to inform you that I am unable to do
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so
owing to
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some
engagements at work.

My family already prepared everything completely to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
move
into the new department, unfortunately, yesterday evening, I
suddenly
received my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
’s delegation to attend the workshop. I could not refuse this offering from my managers
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
this is a great opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a higher promotion.

I will be back
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only
on the 12th of September. Once I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
back from there, I will take a few days off to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
ready for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
move
.
Therefore
, I believe I can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
move
into your place on 16th September. I hope you wouldn’t mind my taking longer to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
move
in.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
sincerely
,

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LUC
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IELTS letter I am writing to inform you that I am unable to do so owing to some engagements at work

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  American English
7 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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