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Write a letter to your neighbour.

Write a letter to your neighbour. aQ1km
Good day. Dear Sirs, Let me briefly present myself and a purpose of this letter. My name is Alex Johnson, I am your neighbour living in the house next door. As you probably know I am a son of Peter Johnson - the local deputy with a perfect reputation and I suppose he will consider my letter to you as a friendly sign. The reason is why I am writing to you that tomorrow I am going to celebrate my birthday and I am planning to make a great party with lots of friends of mine. I am afraid that this party would be too noisy for you since there will be too much people, alcohol and funny games. We have already planned to organize a game called "bear-pong", the well-known and traditional party game for all generations, thus I think there will be a lot of drunk people afterwards. I do not want to make worse our relationship due to my birthday party and I would be happy if you would join us tomorrow at 21: 00 the house next door. I hope for your understand. See you on party tomorrow.
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Good
day.

Dear Sirs,

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Let
me
briefly
present myself and a purpose of this letter. My name is Alex Johnson, I am your
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neighbour
living in the
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house
next
door. As you
probably
know I am a son of Peter Johnson
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-
the local deputy with a perfect reputation and I suppose he will consider my letter to you as a friendly
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sign
.

The reason is why I am writing to you that tomorrow I am going to celebrate my
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birthday and
I am planning to
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make
a great
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party
with lots of friends of mine.

I am afraid that this
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party
would be too noisy for you since there will be too much
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people
, alcohol and
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funny
games. We have already planned to organize a game called
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"
bear-pong
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"
, the well-known and traditional
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party
game for all generations,
thus
I
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think
there will be
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a lot of
drunk
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people
afterwards.

I do not want to
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make
worse our relationship due to my birthday
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party
and I would be happy if you would
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join
us tomorrow at 21: 00 the
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house
next
door.

I hope for your
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understand
.

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See
you on
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party
tomorrow.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbour.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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