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The company you work for is going to introduce a change to the way its products are advertised.

The company you work for is going to introduce a change to the way its products are advertised. xOEgN

Dear all staff members, I am writing to inform you of the changing the way of advertising our latest products. As the survey we did a couple of months ago shows clearly, the volume of sales has been still dropping down. Therefore, the products will be needed to recreate with the new advertisement. First, we would like to start posting the new ads on the web site from next week as just like a trial. Let's see what will go on. Best regards,

Dear all staff members,

I am writing to inform you of the changing the way of advertising our latest products.

As the survey we did a couple of months ago This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
clearly
, the volume of sales has been still
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "dropping".dropping
dropping down
. Therefore
, the products will be needed
 to recreate with the new advertisement. First
, we would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 posting the new ads on the Did you mean "website"?website
web site
 from next
 week as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
Comparison is written 'as just "as"'.as
like
 a trial. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 what will go on.

Best regards, 