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Suggestions customer letter to a bookstore

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I hereby express my opinion about the bookstore. What strikes me the most when entering the bookstore is the atmosphere, the decor, tones, lights, and relaxing music, which make the environment extremely cozy. Another beneficial point is the vast choice of books on various topics, for all types of audiences. Without doubt, the freedom to analyze someone's work with all the comfort of the sofas available in the reading area is a factor that adds positively the end-user experience. To complete, the installation of the cafeteria with several types of coffees and snacks makes customers have a great experience. I do not like the layout of how the books are positioned. In addition to the themes being mixed, the releases are also not highlighted. I suggest you make a study for a more practical layout and with greater visibility of the themes being launched and the works with a promotional price.
I hereby express my opinion about the bookstore. What strikes me the most when entering the bookstore is the atmosphere, the decor, tones, lights, and relaxing music, which
make
the environment
extremely
cozy. Another beneficial point is the vast choice of books on various topics, for all types of audiences.

Without doubt, the freedom to analyze someone's work with all the comfort of the sofas available in the reading area is a factor that
adds
positively
the
end
-user experience. To complete, the installation of the cafeteria with several types of coffees and snacks
makes
customers have a great experience. I do not like the layout of how the books
are positioned
.
In addition
to the themes
being mixed
, the releases are
also
not highlighted.

I suggest you
make
a study for a more practical layout and with greater visibility of the themes
being launched
and the works with a promotional price.
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IELTS letter Suggestions customer letter to a bookstore

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
151 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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