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An Australian company offers money to foreign students to study in Australia.Write a letter to the company. Introduce yourself Say what do you want to study How the money will help you

An Australian company offers money to foreign students to study in Australia. Write a letter to the company. Introduce yourself Say what do you want to study How the money will help you pLBMa

Dear Sir, I am Jenny Jackson and I belong to India. Furthermore, I heard about the scholarship which are provided by your organization to pupils of another country to take the education in Australia. In addition, I completed computer engineering last year in India and I want to pursue masters in the same field from the university of Sydney. Also, I passed engineering with good percentage as well as I was the topper in my class. But my financial condition is not good and the fee for the graduate course is high. Moreover, this money will reduce the burden of my parents' shoulders who are anxious about my education cost. Additionally, I will be able to pay more attention on my studies as I will not have to find any part time job. But, when will I get the scholorship? If you have any query, please contact me at anytime. My contact number is 9999824510. I await a favourable response. Yours faithfully, Jenny Jackson

Dear Sir,

I am Jenny Jackson and I belong to India. Furthermore
, I heard about the scholarship which are provided
 by your organization to pupils of another country to take the education in Australia.

In addition
, I completed computer engineering last year in India and I want to pursue masters in the same field from the university of Sydney. Also
, I passed engineering with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 percentage as well
 as I was the topper in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 my financial condition is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and the fee for the graduate course is high.

Moreover
, this money will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the burden of my parents' shoulders who are anxious about my education cost. Additionally
, I will be able to pay more attention on my studies as I will not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 find any This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 job. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, when will I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the Possible spelling mistake found.scholarship
scholorship
?

If you have any query, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 contact me at anytime. My contact number is 9999824510. I await a Possible spelling mistake. 'favourable' is British English.favorable
favourable
 response.

Yours faithfully
,

Jenny Jackson