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Students from rural areas often find it difficult to access university education. Some people think that it should become easier for them to study at universities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Students from rural areas often find it difficult to access university education. Some people think that it should become easier for them to study at universities. with this opinion? 8EWl
History of crime at the earth is as ancient as the birth of human. People commit wide range of crimes and some of then are geologically differentiated. Besides of the types, the number of crime is increasing in many parts of world and each has its specific cause. In the following paragraphs, i shall discuss a few of them with their cause and possible solution. In developing countries like India, Pakistan, Bangladesh and others, the judicial system is not fully established. Governments do not have complete hold on the courts. So, the judges and the layers don't work according to laws. Because of this, whenever a wealthy person do wrong, he easily skips the system by using his sources and money. Moreover, at many instances, he does not even need to go to the police station or in court. You can say, "the courts are bitches of wealthy people". We can overcome this problem by supporting our governments and the governments need to take some serious actions against the judges and the layers. We have to strengthen our judiciary system. The second most important point comes in my mind is our separation from religion. Regardless of our believes, we should abide by the basic rules of humanity, that are decided by our creator. Everyone has his own rights, hence, no one should hurt others. By complying to the laws of our God, we can prevent ourselves from evils. Therefore, the end of evil is the end of crime. In the conclusion, most of crimes are result of our negligence towards justice and religion. We can deal them by empowering the system and educating the people about religion. We would have to work along the leaders to rectify these problems.
History of
crime
at the earth is as ancient as the birth of human.
People
commit wide range of
crimes
and
some of then
are
geologically
differentiated.
Besides
of the types, the number of
crime
is increasing in
many
parts of world and each has its specific cause. In the following paragraphs,
i
shall discuss a few of them with their cause and possible solution.

In
developing countries
like India, Pakistan, Bangladesh
and others
, the judicial system is not
fully
established.
Governments
do not have complete hold on the courts.
So
, the judges and the layers don't work according to laws.
Because of this
, whenever a wealthy person do
wrong
, he
easily
skips the system by using his sources and money.
Moreover
, at
many
instances, he does not even need to go to the police station or in court. You can say,
"
the courts are bitches of wealthy
people
"
. We can overcome this problem by supporting our
governments
and the
governments
need to take
some
serious actions against the judges and the layers. We
have to
strengthen our judiciary system.

The second most
important
point
comes
in my mind is our separation from religion. Regardless of our
believes
, we should abide by the basic
rules
of humanity, that
are decided
by our creator. Everyone has his
own
rights,
hence
, no one should hurt others. By complying to the laws of our God, we can
prevent
ourselves from evils.
Therefore
, the
end
of evil is the
end
of crime.

In the conclusion, most of
crimes
are result of our negligence towards justice and religion. We can deal them by empowering the system and educating the
people
about religion. We would
have to
work along the leaders to rectify these problems.
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IELTS letter Students from rural areas often find it difficult to access university education. Some people think that it should become easier for them to study at universities. with this opinion?

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