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One of the major problems facing the world today is the growing number of refugees. The developed nations in the world should tackle the situation by taking more refugees. To what extend do you agree with this opinion.

One of the major problems facing the world today is the growing number of refugees. The developed nations in the world should tackle the situation by taking more refugees. AEDX
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to accommodation facilities in your college hostel. I heard numerous positive responses about your college because of which I have joined a short-term specialization course on Modern History. My course is commencing from 1st of April 2021 and will last for about a month. I will be arriving on 30th March in order to settle in the hostel room before my course begins. My departure will be on 2nd of May. I will be new to this country and have no idea about the accommodation in the city. I was informed that the university provides hostel facility free of charge to registered students. Kindly help me in arranging a shared room with a person who is also registered in the same course. Since, I am a vegetarian it would be great if I can have simple, veg food and would also require laundry facility. Since I am not aware of the distance between the university and hostel, I would like to know about the transportation facilities that are available and what would be best and affordable way of commuting to and from college so that I can save some money. Please respond at the earliest convenience. Yours faithfully Manasa Polavarapu
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to accommodation facilities in your college hostel.

I heard numerous
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positive
responses about your college
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because
of which I have
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joined
a short-term specialization
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course
on Modern History. My
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course
is commencing from 1st of April 2021 and will last for about a month. I will be arriving on 30th March in order to settle in the hostel room
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before
my
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course
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begins
. My departure will be on 2nd of May.

I will be new to this country and have no
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idea
about the accommodation in the city. I
was informed
that the university provides hostel facility free of charge to registered students. Kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me in arranging a shared room with a person who is
also
registered in the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. Since, I am a vegetarian it would be great if I can have simple, veg food and would
also
require laundry facility.

Since I am not aware of the distance between the university and hostel, I would like to know about the transportation facilities that are available and what would be best and affordable way of commuting to and from college
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so
that I can save
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some
money.

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Please
respond at the earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully


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IELTS letter One of the major problems facing the world today is the growing number of refugees. The developed nations in the world should tackle the situation by taking more refugees.

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208 words
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