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Although you have never formally studied computing ,You have always been interested in computers .You have just read about a computer course that really interest you .But it is only for people who have completed an elementary course . Write a letter to the college enrollment officer, in your letter -Explain why you are writing -describe your circumstances -Ask if special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course.

Although you have never formally studied computing, You have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interest you. But it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrollment officer, in your letter -Explain why you are writing -describe your circumstances -Ask if special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course. jBwN
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing this letter in connection with your 2 weeks computer course which was advertised in Hindustan times news paper stated on 10th September. I am interested to apply for the course but Unfortunately, I do not qualify the pre-requires of the course. I am currently studying in St. john college where I have been given an responsibility to prepare and PowerPoint presentation. I have no understanding of this regard and Therefore have been looking for a good computer course from plethora amount of time. Although due to time and financial constraints I could not learn them in the past but always been fascinated to lean it. As I was going through the newspaper and came across your article which satisfies with the content cost, Time duration of your course. The only drawback is I have not completed my elementary course. I would request you to kindly consider my application on special arrangement to enroll in the course. It would be grateful of you if you consider my humble request. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon! Your sincerely,
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing this letter in connection with your 2 weeks computer
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course
which
was advertised
in Hindustan
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times
This word is normally spelled as one.
news paper
stated on 10th September. I
am interested
to apply for the
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course
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but
Unfortunately, I do not qualify the
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pre-requires
of the course.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
currently
studying in St. john college where I have been
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given
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an
responsibility to prepare and PowerPoint presentation.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have no understanding of this regard and
Therefore
have been looking for a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
computer
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
from plethora amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. Although due to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
and financial constraints I could not learn them in the past
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
always
been fascinated
to lean it. As I was going through the newspaper and came across your article which satisfies with the content cost,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Time
duration of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
drawback is I have not completed my elementary course.

I would request you to kindly consider my application on special arrangement to enroll in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. It would be grateful of you if you consider my humble request.

I am looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
!

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, You have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interest you. But it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrollment officer, in your letter -Explain why you are writing -describe your circumstances -Ask if special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course.

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186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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