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sports match describing to friend

sports match describing to friend VYeJ7

Dear Georgie, I hope you are doing good & expecting a faster recovery. I came to hospital yesterday to visit you, but you were in rest apart from that hospital authorities clearly rejected me from meeting you, as you need lot of rest for getting a normal health. I felt pity as you got accident a day before the final match of tournament not only me the whole team went into shock. without your hard work and extraordinary abilities, we would not have reached the qualifies too. Any how the final tournament is going to be held tomorrow in our college ground. The chief guest is Mr. Ronaldo who is one of your favourite stars. The day was quite sunny and bit windy too. Huge number of Enthusiastic Supporters attended for match from all the different colleges. Majority of supporters displayed your pic play card along with them there was get well soon play cards too. On the first half of the match the opposition team really played very attacking game where they scored 3 goals. They broke our defence team very easily as if they knew our weakness. Paul their forward player got injured during the 3rd goal of the match and he was retired hurt, in place of him peter took his position. The other hand our team also made a tremendous come back in the match, where we scored 3 goals. At one point we thought match was draw, in the peak time jo scored a goal and we won at last. It was historic win, where we struggled to win, anyhow we made it, at one point we thought if you were there, we would have not worked this hard. Tomorrow after finishing the classes whole will be visiting to meet, you at hospital. we pray for your soon recovery. Yours loving friend,

Dear Georgie,

I hope you are doing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 & expecting a faster recovery. I came to hospital yesterday to visit you, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you were in rest apart from that hospital authorities clearly
 rejected me from meeting you, as you need It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
 rest for getting a normal health. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 felt pity as you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 accident a day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the final You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
match
 of tournament not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 me the whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
 went into shock. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWithout
without
 your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work and extraordinary abilities, we would not have reached the qualifies too.

Any how the final tournament is going to be held
 tomorrow in our college ground. The chief guest is Mr. Ronaldo who is one of your Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.favorite
favourite
 stars. The day was quite sunny and It seems that an article is missing.a bit
bit
 windy too. Huge number of Enthusiastic Supporters attended for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
match
 from all the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 colleges. Majority of supporters displayed your pic play card along with them there was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 well This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 play cards too.

On the first
 half of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
match
 the opposition You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
really
 played This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 attacking game where they scored 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withobjectiveintentiontargetambition
goals
. They broke our Possible spelling mistake. 'defence' is British English.defense
defence
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
easily
 as if they knew our weakness. Paul their forward player This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 injured during the 3rd You use this word too often, consider replacing it withobjectiveintentiontargetambition
goal
 of the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).match, and
match and
 he was retired
 hurt, in place of him peter took his position.

The other hand our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
also
 made a tremendous This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
match
, where we scored 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withobjectiveintentiontargetambition
goals
. At one point we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcontesttrialgameracetestbout
match
 was draw, in the peak time Possible spelling mistake found.JoJOtogonoso
jo
 scored a Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).goal, and
goal and
 we won at last.

It was historic win, where we struggled to win, anyhow we made it, at one point we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 if you were there, we would have not worked this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
. Tomorrow after finishing the classes whole will be visiting to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
, you at hospital. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 pray for your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 recovery.

Yours loving friend, 