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specialized school is looking for well qualified employee

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Dear Sir, I am very interested in your advertisement in today`s eddition of "Darakchi" and I should like to apply to be a member of your specialized school. I am thirty-eight years aged and studied at Teaching English as a Foreign Language Facility at Pedagogical Institute in 2000-2004. Thoroughly, I have many of the important qualifications needed for this job. Whereas, I am working as an English teacher at school where have been for the eventual seventeen years. In insertion to this, I participated in varied Teacher Training Courses. I am activist and able to handle multiple tasks simultaneously. Presently I am seeking a position that allow me to develop my skills and experience. I enjoy various outdoor activities such as planting flowers and swimming. I am sociable and I can get on well with new people easily. Your faithfully, Dildora Jurayeva!
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and I should like to apply to be a member of your specialized school. I am thirty-eight years aged and studied at Teaching English as a Foreign Language Facility at Pedagogical Institute in 2000-2004.
Thoroughly
, I have
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of the
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important
qualifications needed for this job. Whereas, I am working as an English teacher at school where have been for the eventual seventeen years. In insertion to this, I participated in varied Teacher Training Courses. I am activist and able to handle multiple tasks
simultaneously
.
Presently
I am seeking a position that
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allow
me to develop my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and experience. I enjoy various outdoor activities such as planting flowers and swimming. I am sociable and I can
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get
on well with new
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people
easily
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Dildora
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IELTS letter specialized school is looking for well qualified employee

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  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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