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Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people. mag1
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in the hope that you can help me with my camera. I bot the camera Canon 650D in the official shop in Thailand, while I was there a week ago. I purchased it for a gift for my son on his birthsday. Unfortunately, when I return to my home in Canada, and my son opened the package, we found that there is no charger for accumulator. I am shure I sow the charger on the counter in the shop. I ges the shop assistant just forget put it inside the box. I would ask you to give me another charger, as I cant use the camera with uncharged accumulator. And it was not my fall to forget the charger in the shop. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Victor Ulricht
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in the hope that you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me with my camera.

Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'I'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
I bot
the camera Canon 650D in the official shop in Thailand, while I was there a week ago.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
it for a gift for my son on his
Possible spelling mistake found.
birthsday
.

Unfortunately, when I return to my home in Canada, and my son opened the package, we found that there is no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
charger
for accumulator. I am
Possible spelling mistake found.
shure
I sow the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
charger
on the counter in the shop. I
Possible spelling mistake found.
ges
the shop assistant
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
forget put it inside the box.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would ask you to give me another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
charger
, as I
Did you mean "can't" or "cannot"?
cant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the camera with uncharged accumulator. And it was not my fall to forget the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
charger
in the shop.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Victor
Possible spelling mistake found.
Ulricht
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IELTS letter Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
139 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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