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Some people say that computers are not good for children.

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IELTS letter Some people say that computers are not good for children.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
121 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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