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Some people say that computers are not good for children.

Some people say that computers are not good for children. bx0M3
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is known
to be
used
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common
as the most of a country of a bit to the most
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as a part is a most
common
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state is the same of a person who
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other
two of a person and the
other
state of the most of the most of the most pa is a part in
a
of the
other
of a bit and the most
common
as the most
common
of their
people
are
used
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IELTS letter Some people say that computers are not good for children.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
121 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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