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share my perspective of the library

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Dear Madam, I’m very pleased to share my perspective of the library. My first impression about the library is it more extraordinary than others, the decoration here is like being drawn from a picture in a poetic fairytale. The enormous tree in the middle was shocked me the first time I saw it. Around the tree have the seat with fresh air and some jazz music, right about is a skylight where the light is shining straight down, the spite of that it is not too harsh and soft enough, it makes reading sound likes somnolent, now more delightful. The variety of books with different genres honestly emphasized me, since some books are exclusive cannot find anywhere. Perhaps this is the reason why there are so often many people, nevertheless, everyone is very responsible and executive rules of the library. However, there is still a thing that bothers me a lot. Library import too few books, it is maximum 2 books similar to each other, so reading it is like hunting. I have to always patiently waiting for my turn to read it. In addition, even though there are miscellaneous books but the library is too crowded too. Therefore it is understandable for the book to be misplaced, also there are a few librarians it means that every time I can not find a book, I have to wait for the Librarian to help me. I hope that the Library can be perceived about the number of books in the library. In my point of view, the library can decrease some books that not a lot of people like. Likewise, Library needs to have more Librarians who take care of the place of the book, after all this is a fundamental thing, doesn’t it? Regardless, I hope Library will notice the thing I have said. And I want to say thank you to Librarian who has always helped every time I need something. Thank you very much, Reader in Library
Dear Madam, I’m
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to share my perspective of the library. My
first
impression about the library is it more extraordinary than others, the decoration here is like
being drawn
from a picture in a poetic
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fairytale
. The enormous tree in the middle
was shocked
me the
first
time I
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saw
it. Around the tree have the seat with fresh air and
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some
jazz music, right about is a skylight where the light is shining straight down, the spite of that it is not too harsh and soft
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enough
, it
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makes
reading sound likes somnolent,
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now
more delightful. The variety of
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books
with
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different
genres
honestly
emphasized me, since
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some
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books
are exclusive cannot find anywhere. Perhaps this is the reason why there are
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so
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often
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people
,
nevertheless
, everyone is
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very
responsible and executive
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rules
of the library.
However
, there is
still
a thing that bothers me a lot. Library import too few
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books
, it is maximum 2
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books
similar to each other,
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so
reading it is like hunting. I
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have to
always
patiently
waiting for my turn to read it.
In addition
,
even though
there are miscellaneous
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books
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but
the library is
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too crowded too
.
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Therefore
it is understandable for the
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book
to
be misplaced
,
also
there are a few
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librarians
it means that every time I can not find a
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book
, I
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have to
wait for the
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Librarian
to
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help
me. I hope that the Library can
be perceived
about the number of
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books
in the library. In my point of view, the library can decrease
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some
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books
that not
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a lot of
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people
like.
Likewise
, Library needs to have more
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Librarians
who take care of the place of the
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book
,
after all
this is a fundamental thing, doesn’t it? Regardless, I hope Library will notice the thing I have said. And I want to say thank you to
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Librarian
who has always
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helped
every time I need something. Thank you
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very
much, Reader in
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Library
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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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