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Hi Mr. Nah, 00: 40am I do not have a sleeping tonight. I heard that you are coming back your home. It is your home. I am feeling a sense of happy whole today when I knew that news. It was feeling hopeless for previous years ago. Yes, Korean said that “you do not put your mistaken under the reason”. 2010, I tried to send an email to you and you agreed with my CV besides the phoning from Mr. Kim (YCH) with you. I was a younger and weakness in experience knowledge about logistics and shipping field. . . I kept my mind in front of behavior from Mr. Kien, Ms. Ruby Huong…I worked, worked no salary to be equally my volume jobs… I do not know whatsoever my tasks. It was a worker…. even sometimes you received the bad information about me from Mr. Kien…and they gave lots of trouble issued, confused to me…. . a lots, lots of things… I called you about action of Dong min shin, you talked me that “Nhung, take it easy”…. yes sir…”take it easy” or take everything easy way… Dong yang co. , just established …you told me that “Nhung, this is a new account of new sales man in korea office. His name is Yoo. . , please try your best to keep the customer for him. . please keep it. While my leg has an injury in the accident … I go and do my tasks…” Mr. Kang joined in Eusu HN, you told me that “please help Mr. Kang”…I did…did it well in my task from my boss (who was be in island where is far from me…. ). May, 2020 Mr. Yoo followed the assignment from manager to kick me out in the pained deeply. (yes…he did a good job for his tasks but he forgot that who was bring him to Vietnam at this position) “The over many years in the awaiting for your coming back, email, text-messages…but you said that NO, NO… I cannot come back…. Many things has been happened and overcome and gone off and I always did it the best as much as… because this is Mr. Nah got a paint to create the office…. He did not appear here but I believed that he is still looking everything here. ” Before you left Eusu co. , . you told me that “Nhung please try to work and keep Ha noi office, you can do… you left in the painful. . ” In hopeless of waiting, you stopped me to give up about coming back…. I was alone person to against many managers to maintain Ha noi office. The office could be stable…a lots of viet namese thought that “Ha noi is Nhung’s office”… No one could touch the office operation, no one came to change the innovation of Ha noi office or they wanted to make the benefit from it only, didn’t them? Yes, finally I was a crime…. in a week for got out of office. I drew money from company for my personnel. Said manager from the evidence by accounting team, he beaten her …. so whenever he asked himself about where were volume ha noi office? Why did customer Vietnam, china…helped serving by eusu? Who was managing in Ha noi office? What did he know about eusu Ha noi since Mr. Nah quitted except the performance report in hand by monthly. Mr. Nah…I am happy in tearing down when you come back… you come back too late…I created the mistake and I did it by myself… I am sorry for whole my mistaken.
Hi Mr. Nah,

00: 40am I do not have a sleeping tonight. I heard that you are coming
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back
your home. It is your home.

I am feeling a sense of happy whole
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today
when I knew that news. It was feeling hopeless for previous years ago.

Yes, Korean said that “you do not put your mistaken under the reason”.

2010, I tried to
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send an email to
you and you
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agreed
with my CV
besides
the phoning from Mr. Kim (
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YCH
) with you. I was a younger and weakness in experience knowledge about logistics and shipping field.
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.
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.


I
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kept
my mind in front of behavior from Mr.
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Kien
, Ms. Ruby
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Huong
…
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I
worked, worked no salary to be
equally
my volume jobs…
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I
do not know whatsoever my tasks. It was a worker….
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even
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sometimes
you received the
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bad
information about me from Mr.
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Kien
…and they gave
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lots
of trouble issued, confused to me….
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.
a
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lots
,
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lots
of things…

I called you about action of Dong min shin, you talked me that “
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Nhung
, take it easy”….
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yes
sir…
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”take
it easy” or take everything easy way…

Dong yang co.
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,
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just
established …you
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told
me that “
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Nhung
, this is a new account of new sales
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man
in
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korea
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office
. His name is
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Yoo
.
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.
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,
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please
try your best to
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keep
the customer for him.
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.
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please
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keep
it. While my leg
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has
an injury in the accident … I go and do my tasks…”

Mr.
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Kang
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joined
in
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Eusu
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HN
, you
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told
me that “
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please
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help
Mr.
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Kang
”…
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I
did…did it well in my task from my boss (who was
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be
in island where is far from me….
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)
.

When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "May 2020".
May, 2020
Mr.
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Yoo
followed the assignment from manager to kick me out in the pained
deeply
. (yes…he did a
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good
job for his tasks
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but
he forgot that who was
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bring
him to Vietnam at this position)

“The over
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many
years in the
Did you mean "awaiting" or "waiting for"?
awaiting for
your coming
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back
, email, text-messages…
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but
you said that NO, NO… I cannot
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come
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back…
.
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Many
things
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has
been happened
and overcome and gone off and I always did it the best as much as…
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because
this is Mr. Nah
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got
a paint to create the
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office…
. He did not appear here
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but
I believed that he is
still
looking everything here. ”

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Before
you
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left
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Eusu
co.
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, .
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you
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told
me that “
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Nhung
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please
try to work and
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keep
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Ha noi
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office
, you can do… you
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left
in the painful.
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.
”

In hopeless of waiting, you
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stopped
me to give up about coming
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back…
. I was alone person to against
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many
managers to maintain
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Ha noi
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office
. The
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office
could be stable…a
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lots
of
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viet
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namese
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thought
that “
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Ha noi
is
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Nhung
’s
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office”…
No one could touch the
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office
operation, no one came to
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change
the innovation of
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Ha noi
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office or
they wanted to
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make
the benefit from it
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only
, didn’t them?

Yes,
finally
I was a crime….
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in
a week for
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got
out of
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office
. I drew money from
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company
for my personnel. Said manager from the evidence by accounting team,
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he
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beaten
her ….
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so
whenever he asked himself about where were volume ha
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noi
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office
? Why did customer Vietnam, china…
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helped
The verb 'helped' is used with an infinitive: "to serve" or "serve".
serving
by
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eusu
? Who was managing in
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Ha noi
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office
? What did he know about
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eusu
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Ha noi
since Mr. Nah
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quitted
except the performance report in hand by monthly.

Mr. Nah…
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I
am happy in tearing down when you
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come
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back…
you
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come
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back
too late…
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I
created the mistake and I did it by myself…

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am sorry for whole my mistaken.
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IELTS letter sense of happy about working in the office

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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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