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You are the Events Manager for your company. Write an email of approximately 120 words to a hotel asking for information about venues for a conference dinner. Use the notes below. Company celebrating 10th anniversary – 200 guests Need: • drinks and snack food in garden • round tables inside, 10–12 people at each table • three-course meal, with vegetarian and vegan options • band and space for dancing • microphone and good sound system for speeches Ask about: best price per person

You are the Events Manager for your company. Write an email of approximately 120 words to a hotel asking for information about venues for a conference dinner. Use the notes below. Company celebrating 10th anniversary – 200 guests Need: • drinks and snack food in garden • round tables inside, 10–12 people at each table • three-course meal, with vegetarian and vegan options • band and space for dancing • microphone and good sound system for speeches Ask about: best price per person PWq7w
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to ask for about Company celebrating 10th anniversary at your hotel. We are looking for a place at one garden big, one large room and this can accomdate 200 people. We would like to set up a garden for guests to eat snacks and drinks before the event starts. We would like a large room inside with round table and 10-12 people at each options. We are planning have a eat three-course meal, with vegetarian and vegan options. Could you tell me know if you have microphone and good sound system for speeches? We would like hire band and we want to set up one space for dancing. And finaly, so could you tell me what your best price for this is? I am looking forward to hearing from you. The Best Regards, Maria.
Dear Sir/Madam,

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celebrating 10th anniversary at your hotel. We are looking for a place at one garden
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me know if you have microphone and
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I am looking forward to hearing from you.

The Best Regards,

Maria.
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IELTS letter You are the Events Manager for your company. Write an email of approximately 120 words to a hotel asking for information about venues for a conference dinner. Use the notes below. Company celebrating 10th anniversary – 200 guests Need: • drinks and snack food in garden • round tables inside, 10–12 people at each table • three-course meal, with vegetarian and vegan options • band and space for dancing • microphone and good sound system for speeches Ask about: best price per person

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