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1) You’re fried asking for your advice, she goes to a university and can’t decide whether to study music or business management. Write a letter and in it Say how you felt when you got a letter What the good points are for both sides and What is your advice.

1) You’re fried asking for your advice, she goes to a university and can’t decide whether to study music or business management. Write a letter and in it Say how you felt when you got a letter What the good points are for both sides and What is your advice. R2O9P
Dear Vishal, I hope you are pink of your health. I recently heard about your school result and I am really proud of that you got a 1st in your class. Yesterday I got your letter that you are in dilemma about two subject in your college. As you decide that you are going to take admission in same college in which I am already completed my master degree in business management. So I must this is your wise decision to appear in one of the best college in the country. I wold like to talk about subject in which you have been confused. If I talk about business management subject is the evergreen stream and it has also a very bright after completion your study. Many well-known multinational companies are come for placement and university tries to put a joining letter in your hands before you clear your final year examination. Another choice is to study in music or not I would say this branch is also have a very successful carrier if you are found of interest in music. There is also a very good opportunity for students. So you do not need worry about your carrier whatever stream you want to study. I try to give as much information about your confusion. I hope this will help you to take decision about your future studies. Keep in touch! All the best Devang jani.
Dear Vishal,

I hope you are pink of your health. I recently heard about your school
result and
I am
really
proud of that you
got
a 1st in your
class
. Yesterday I
got
your letter that you are in dilemma about two subject in your college.

As
you decide that you are going to take admission in same college in which I am already completed my master degree in business management.
So
I
must
this is your wise decision to appear in one of the best college in the country.
I wold
like to talk about subject in which you have
been confused
. If I talk about business management subject is the evergreen stream and it has
also
a
very
bright after completion your study.
Many
well-known multinational
companies
are
come
for placement and university tries to put a joining letter in your hands
before
you
clear
your final year examination. Another choice is to study in music or not I would say this branch is
also
have a
very
successful carrier if you
are found
of interest in music. There is
also
a
very
good
opportunity for students.
So
you do not need
worry
about your carrier whatever stream you want to study.

I try to give as much information about your confusion. I hope this will
help
you to take decision about your future studies.

Keep
in touch!

All the best

Devang
jani
.
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IELTS letter 1) You’re fried asking for your advice, she goes to a university and can’t decide whether to study music or business management. Write a letter and in it Say how you felt when you got a letter What the good points are for both sides and What is your advice.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
236 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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