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Apology to friend that you damaged which you borrowed.

Apology to friend that you damaged which you borrowed. D2G5m
Dear Aftab, Sorry it’s been so long to write to you but at last I put pen to paper to explain why I haven’t returned that 5AM club book I borrowed from you To be honest, I’ve been feeling guilty that I have not written to you these days. I’m very sorry; I have to own up that I damaged that book is to you as it was passed down from your late father. What happened is that I had been reading up the chapter about morning habits when I knocked over the cup of green tea which splashed all over the book. Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at the time. I’ve sent the book away to be repaired. I didn’t realize that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway. It should be as good as new when I get it back next week and then I’ll send it on to you. Again, I’m so sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you forgive me Best wishes Manu
Dear
Aftab
,

Sorry it’s been
so
long to write to you
but
at last I put pen to paper to
explain
why I haven’t returned that 5AM club
book
I borrowed from you

To be honest, I’ve been feeling guilty that I have not written to you these days. I’m
very
sorry; I
have to
own
up that I damaged that
book
is to you as it
was passed
down from your late father.

What happened is that I had been reading up the chapter about morning habits when I knocked over the cup of green tea which splashed all over the
book
. Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at the time.

I’ve
sent
the
book
away to
be repaired
. I didn’t realize that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway. It should be as
good
as new when I
get
it back
next
week and then I’ll
send
it on to you.

Again, I’m
so
sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you forgive me

Best wishes

Manu
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IELTS letter Apology to friend that you damaged which you borrowed.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
176 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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