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Letter .. You are living in an apartment for past year recently a new neighbour moved in and causing a lot of noises which disturb you

Letter. . You are living in an apartment for past year recently a new neighbour moved in and causing a lot of noises which disturb you XEWjg

Dear Hamza, Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to bring your attention to an unpleasant issue that I am facing from last week. I just wanted to let you know that one of your tenants who moved in just two weeks ago in unit number 6 are making a lot of noises and they have a night party almost each day so noises become more louder during night time when I try to sleep. I could not sleep a single night for two weeks. And its not only me but other neighbours are also complaining about it and we tried to talk to them politely but the arguments keep growing. Therefore, I would highly appreciate if you ask them not to make noises after 9: 00pm. But if that also does not work than allow me to move to another apartment on a different floor. If you need any information please do not hesitate to contact me. Thanking in advance for you consideration. Yours faithfully.

Dear Hamza,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to bring your attention to an unpleasant issue that I am facing from last week.

I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that one of your tenants who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 two weeks ago in unit number 6 are making This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).noises, and
noises and
 they have a night party almost each day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 noises become Use only "louder" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.louder
more louder
 during This word is normally spelled as one.nighttime
night time
 when I try to sleep. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 could not sleep a single night for two weeks. And its not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 other Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
 are also
 complaining about Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).it, and
it and
 we tried to talk to them politely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the arguments This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 growing.

Therefore
, I would highly
 appreciate if you ask them not to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 noises after 9: 00pm. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 if that also
 does not work than This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to another apartment on a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 floor.

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you need any information This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 do not hesitate to contact me. Thanking in advance for you consideration.

Yours faithfully
. 