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Dear VinUni University, My name is Hoang Thuc Lam, currently the teacher of Informatics at Gia Dinh High School, and also the management teacher of Gia Dinh High School's Club Festival Organizers Committee. I have known Nguyen Minh Chau for more than 2 years since she was chosen to be a part of Gia Dinh High School's Club Festival Organizers Committee in the selection and it's my great pleasure to write this letter of reference for her. Having guided and worked with her for more than 2 years, I am impressed by her persevering commitment to learning, flexibility in work, and responsibility. Chau is a lively and energetic student with a progressive attitude. With what missions she is given, she will do it with all her abilities in order to bring the best results for the Club Festival. Also, she always gets on well with the members of the Club Festival Organizers Committee with her good teamwork skills and I have no regret choosing her. She has a progressive attitude so she knows when she needs to listen and learn from the comments of her companion teachers and seniors to comprehend herself and be more responsible with what she has done. Besides, she has a sense of humor, she brings happiness and spreads her positive energy to other people and her sociability helps improve her bonding with other members. After all, I have recognized her as a person who can adapt to the shifts of the working environment, hard-working, diligent, and kind. She rarely receives any bad comments from others and everybody loves who she is. When she is in grade 12 now, I am her Informatics teacher. In this role, I can witness another aspect of her and I have no doubt to say that Chau is a good student. She manages well in all subjects, especially mine, and maintains good grades through many exams even though she doesn't stand out for her computer skills among her peers. This is all thanks to Chau’s diligence and eagerness to absorb knowledge. Moreover, Chau also looks for new experiences and memories to fulfill her student life by participating in Gia Dinh Dance Club as a member and a number of outdoor activities at school. From that, she has more friends and widens her social relationships which helps her witness more perspectives of people and learn more life lessons on her own. I believe that if Chau becomes a student of…, she can improve herself maximally, overcome her limitations through… education and collective activities. I believe, Chau will be a colorful student of … and dedicate good values ​​for your school in the future. Hopefully, after a few lines of my letter of recommendation, Chau will be considered by the school and given the opportunity for him to become a student of the school and fulfill his dream. Sincerely, Hoang Thuc Lam Gia Dinh's Club Festival Organizers Committee
Dear
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VinUni
University,

My name is
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Hoang
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Thuc
Lam,
currently
the
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teacher
of Informatics at
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Gia
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Dinh
High
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School
, and
also
the management
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teacher
of
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Gia
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Dinh
High School's
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Club
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Festival
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Organizers
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Committee
. I have known Nguyen
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Minh
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Chau
for more than 2 years since she
was chosen
to be a part of
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Gia
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Dinh
High School's
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Club
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Festival
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Organizers
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Committee
in the selection and it's my great pleasure to write this letter of reference for her.

Having guided and worked with her for more than 2 years, I
am impressed
by her persevering commitment to learning, flexibility in work, and responsibility.

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Chau
is a lively and energetic
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student
with a progressive attitude. With what missions she is
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given
, she will do it with all her abilities in order to bring the best results for the
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Club
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Festival
.
Also
, she always
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gets
on well with the members of the
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Club
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Festival
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Organizers
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Committee
with her
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good
teamwork
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skills
and I have no regret choosing her. She has a progressive attitude
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so
she knows when she needs to listen and learn from the comments of her companion
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teachers
and seniors to comprehend herself and be more responsible with what she has done.
Besides
, she has a sense of humor, she brings happiness and spreads her
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positive
energy to other
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people
and her sociability
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helps
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improve
her bonding with other members.
After all
, I have recognized her as a person who can adapt to the shifts of the working environment,
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hard
-working, diligent, and kind. She rarely receives any
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bad
comments from others and everybody
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loves
who she is.

When she is in grade 12
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now
, I am her Informatics
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teacher
. In this role, I can witness another aspect of her and I have no doubt to say that
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Chau
is a
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good
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student
. She manages well in all subjects,
especially
mine, and maintains
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good
grades through
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many
exams
even though
she doesn't stand out for her computer
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skills
among her peers. This is all thanks to
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Chau
’s diligence and eagerness to absorb knowledge.
Moreover
,
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Chau
also
looks for new experiences and memories to fulfill her
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student
life by participating in
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Gia
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Dinh
Dance
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Club
as a member and a number of outdoor activities at
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school
. From that, she has more friends and widens her social relationships which
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helps
her witness more perspectives of
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people
and learn more life lessons on her
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own
.

I believe that if
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Chau
becomes a
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student
of…, she can
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improve
herself
maximally
, overcome her limitations through… education and collective activities. I believe,
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Chau
will be a colorful
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student
of … and dedicate
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good
values ​​for your
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school
in the future.
Hopefully
, after a few lines of my letter of recommendation,
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Chau
will
be considered
by the
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school
and
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given
the opportunity for him to become a
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student
of the
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school
and fulfill his dream.

Sincerely
,

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Hoang
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Thuc
Lam

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Gia
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Dinh
's
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Club
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Festival
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Organizers
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Committee

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