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aerobics classes next week will be canceled because of the instructor is going on holiday. extra classes will be offered upon his return. Unfortunately, we will not be able to offer a refund for these classes.Now respond to the manager by writing formal letter. You should include your fellings about the situation and what do you think the club should do about the situation.

aerobics classes next week will be canceled because of the instructor is going on holiday. extra classes will be offered upon his return. Unfortunately, we will not be able to offer a refund for these classes. Now respond to the manager by writing formal letter. You should include your fellings about the situation and what do you think the club should do about the situation. m538A
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Zulfiya Norboyva and I have been a member of our sports club since 2019. Iam writing This letter to express my deepest disapointment regarding the cancelation of our next aerobics classes due to the instuctor's absence. As I told you my next months scedule before that i would be on abusiness trip to US for 5days from January, so I could not be able to participate in any club appoinment during that time. Moreover, you assured that the club's schedule will not change dramatically any circumstances. I think it is better for you to persuade the instructor to attend the aerobics classes as usual. If not, you should invite another famous instuctor instead of former one. I look forward to recieving your responce at your earliest convenience if my recommendations are acceptable. Yours faithfully, Zulfiya Norboeva
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change
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IELTS letter aerobics classes next week will be canceled because of the instructor is going on holiday. extra classes will be offered upon his return. Unfortunately, we will not be able to offer a refund for these classes. Now respond to the manager by writing formal letter. You should include your fellings about the situation and what do you think the club should do about the situation.

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