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Motivation Letter for scholarship (not yet)

Motivation Letter for scholarship (not yet) 9Ywl3
My name is Charlotte and I am writing to express my interest in the postgraduate program at X University. Since I was in senior high school, I have got enormous dreams of being a business consultant. As to personal background, my father has a stagnant business for years, which corroborating my objectives and motivating me to assist him as a consultant. To actualize my dream, I enrolled at X with a major in general management at the Y University. At the end of the year, I received an honor as magna cum laude. During my studies, I have keen interests in decision making and multivariate statistics subjects because these subjects enable the company to make a proper decisions by relying on the quantitative that are less biases than qualitative studies. This program would be a good fit for me because of my educational background, and my experience in organizations in various areas, including marketing, human resources and operations that makes me have a broader understanding in those fields. I found it extremely challenging when I was a Manager of Facilities in the Students Association of Management. These occurred during a pandemic, where Facilities members responsible for managing and monitoring the inventories were hindered due to an online learning policy. Therefore, we launched an online platform to exchange the organization’s room with a success percentage of 83%. The organizational activities refine my leadership skills, decision-making, and critical thinking. Despite those above, to work as a consultant, I must continue to learn and expand my knowledge that will broaden my perspective.
My name is
Charlotte and
I am writing to express my interest in the postgraduate program at X University. Since I was in senior high school, I have
got
enormous dreams of being a business consultant. As to personal background, my father has a stagnant business for years, which corroborating my objectives and motivating me to assist him as a consultant.

To actualize my dream,
I enrolled at
X with a major
in general
management at the Y University. At the
end
of the year, I received an honor as magna cum laude. During my studies, I have keen interests in
decision making
and multivariate statistics subjects
because
these subjects enable the
company
to
make
a proper decisions by relying on the quantitative that are
less
biases than qualitative studies.

This program would be a
good
fit for me
because
of my educational background, and my experience in organizations in various areas, including marketing, human resources and operations that
makes
me have a broader understanding in those fields. I found it
extremely
challenging when I was a Manager of Facilities in the Students Association of Management. These occurred during a pandemic, where Facilities members responsible for managing and monitoring the inventories
were hindered
due to an online learning policy.
Therefore
, we launched an online platform to exchange the organization’s room with a success percentage of 83%. The organizational activities refine my leadership
skills
, decision-making, and critical thinking.

Despite those above, to work as a consultant, I
must
continue to learn and expand my knowledge that will broaden my perspective.
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IELTS letter Motivation Letter for scholarship (not yet)

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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