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Dear Sofia, I’m glad to hear that you want to improve your eating habits and get fit. I have some advice for you. First of all, you shouldn’t go everywhere by car. That way, your body won’t become lazy. If I were you, I would eat plenty of fish, fruit and vegetables. If you follow a balanced diet, you won’t put on weight. Another good idea is to join a gym and exercise regularly. This will mean that you’ll soon get in shape and feel fitter. Finally, you should try not to eat junk food, sweets, etc. If you do this, your body won’t store so much sugar and fat. I hope my advice is helpful. Write back and as soon as you can. Lots of love, Quynh

Dear Sofia,

I’m glad to hear that you want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 your eating habits and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 fit. I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 advice for you.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, you shouldn’t go everywhere by car. That way, your body won’t become lazy. If I were you, I would eat This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
plenty
 of fish, fruit and vegetables. If you follow a balanced diet, you won’t put on weight.

Another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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idea
 is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 a gym and exercise regularly
. This will mean that you’ll This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 in shape and feel fitter. Finally
, you should try not to eat junk food, sweets, etc. If you do this, your body won’t store This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much sugar and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
.

I hope my advice is helpful. Write back and as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as you can.

Lots of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
,

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