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Dear Saurabh, I am Sunanda living in your apartment located in Andheri, Mumbai. It’s been a year I am staying in your apartment for rent, recently we have a new neighbour who moved into my next flat. I am writing this letter to you as I would like to explain the inconvenience, I am currently facing because of the new neighbours. There were in total 7 students who recently moved to my next flat, and they are creating a lot of noise especially during night time. They switch on Music and watch television with high volume and sometimes they shout aloud which is highly disturbing me. I am working on a night shift with continuous calls with my client and facing a lot of issues while I am at work due to the noise they are creating. I have requested them in person to avoid creating such disturbance but didn’t seem like they heard my concern. I believe everyone in this apartment should be equally responsible to not disturb fellow neighbours and the solution for this can be to sick a note in the notice board mentioning a few strict policies and rules of the apartment and everyone should adhere to them strictly, in which failing to follow these rules will be facing a penalty or should be vacating the flat. Hope my concern reaches you in the right way and I request you to take the necessary action. Yours Sincerely, Sunanda
Dear Saurabh,

I am
Sunanda
living in your
apartment
located in
Andheri
, Mumbai. It’s been a year I am staying in your
apartment
for rent, recently we have a new
neighbour
who
moved
into my
next
flat. I am writing this letter to you as I would like to
explain
the inconvenience, I am
currently
facing
because
of the new
neighbours
. There were in total 7 students who recently
moved
to my
next
flat, and they are creating
a lot of
noise
especially
during
night time
. They switch on Music and
watch
television with high volume and
sometimes
they shout aloud which is
highly
disturbing me. I am working on a night shift with continuous calls with my client and facing
a lot of
issues while I am at work due to the noise they are creating. I have requested them in person to avoid creating such disturbance
but
didn’t seem like they heard my concern.
I
believe everyone in this
apartment
should be
equally
responsible to not disturb fellow
neighbours
and the solution for this can be to sick a note in the notice board mentioning a few strict policies and
rules
of the
apartment
and everyone should adhere to them
strictly
, in which failing to follow these
rules
will be facing a penalty or should be vacating the flat. Hope my concern reaches you in the right way and I request you to take the necessary action.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Sunanda
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IELTS letter semi-formal letter writing

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
241 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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