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Letter to your local council. Work is being done on the street where you live. The nice is disturbing you.

Letter to your local council. Work is being done on the street where you live. The nice is disturbing you. r87b2
Hello. My name is Danila. I live at Toronto str. 27. Dear Council, I have a problem. I am living near place, where some work is being done. However, I can not get sleep well, because of that noise. They are drilling the road from morning to night. When will it stop? I can not sleep, my wife can not sleep, my children can not sleep. We are not sleeping at all! I suggest the next solution to this problem. How about they stop all works at night and my family would get well sleep. That would be great! By the way, our neighbours are also can not sleep! I have heard, they want to write a letter for you too. PS. Dear Council, please, we need help. We count on you so much. But if you would forget about us, then next letter we would send to Trump and you will regret about this.
Hello. My name is
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Danila
. I
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live
at Toronto
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str
. 27.

Dear Council, I have a problem. I am living near place, where
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some
work is
being done
.
However
, I can not
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get
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sleep
well,
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because
of that noise. They are drilling the road from morning to night. When will it
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stop
? I can not
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sleep
, my wife can not
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sleep
, my children can not
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sleep
. We are not sleeping at all!

I suggest the
next
solution to this problem. How about they
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stop
all works at night and my family would
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get
well
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sleep
. That would be great! By the way, our
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neighbours
are
also
can not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sleep
! I have heard, they want to write a letter for you too.

PS. Dear Council,
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please
, we need
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help
. We count on you
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so
much.
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But
if you would forget about us, then
next
letter we would
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send
to Trump and you will regret about this.

IELTS letter Letter to your local council. Work is being done on the street where you live. The nice is disturbing you.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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