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Last Wednesday you flew from London to vacuvor and when you reach your home you realise you left your hand luggage at plane.write letter. Include when and European, was happen

Last Wednesday you flew from London to vacuvor and when you reach your home you realise you left your hand luggage at plane. write letter. Include when and European, was happen 15qmn
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to inform you about my hand Bakri chai lost forgot to bring with me. I started my journey on Wednesday 13th of March 2021 from London airport to Vancouver; however, on falling day when plane reached to destination I forgot to took my bag. I recognised it when once I reached at my home and that was too late to came back airport and bring it again. In addition, here I provide you a few information for easy identification of my lost bag. Type of bag is a hand luggage belongs to brand skybag and having a white and pink colour. As I mention my name's sticker on it it in front side of bag. Likewise, it contains all my real confidential certificates, bank cards, daries and few makeup products as well. Besides that there is a golden watch which was so precious for me as it gifted by my late grandmother and it was the only last memory which I have had it with of her. I hope you do need full as early as possible to find my handbag! Your faithfully, Anushree Raval.
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you about my hand
This expression can be considered offensive.
Bakri
chai lost forgot to bring with me.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
my journey on Wednesday 13th of March 2021 from London airport to Vancouver;
however
, on falling day when
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plane
reached to destination I forgot to took my bag.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
Possible spelling mistake. 'recognised' is British English.
recognised
it when once I reached at my home and that was too late to came back airport and bring it again.

In addition
, here I provide you a
Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: "little information".
few information
for easy identification of my lost bag. Type of bag is a hand luggage belongs to brand
Possible spelling mistake found.
skybag
and having a white and pink
Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.
colour
.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
I mention my name's sticker on
It seems you either mean "it is", "if it", "it" or there is a comma missing: "it, it".
it it
in front side of bag.

Likewise
, it contains all my real confidential certificates, bank cards,
Possible spelling mistake found.
daries
and few makeup products
as well
.
Besides
that there is a golden
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
which was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
precious for me as it gifted by my late grandmother and it was the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
last memory which I have had it with of her.

I hope you do need full as early as possible to find my handbag!

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Anushree
Possible spelling mistake found.
Raval
.

IELTS letter Last Wednesday you flew from London to vacuvor and when you reach your home you realise you left your hand luggage at plane. write letter. Include when and European, was happen

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192 words
6.0
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