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semi formal letter to thank you

semi formal letter to thank you YmRYr

Dear Mr Jackson, I am writing to thank you for your offer but I would politely decline your help of providing accommodation. I am coming here with a friend and we have decided to share the cost of accommodation. I will go to Rome on 30th April. We will rent a hotel there to rest for the night. I plan to stay here for a week. The first place I decided to visit was the Colosseum, next I would visit museums and art galleries. The Pantheon, known as the temple of all the gods, is the most outstanding structure in the history of ancient Rome and the whole world. That's why I can't help but come here. And of course food is an indispensable thing in this trip, so I will go to famous places to eat. I'm very excited about this trip, and I'd love to meet you and invite you to eat with me. I hope you can suggest me more famous places to eat and drink and other attractive tourist places that you feel I should go to. I look forward to meeting you soon. Best regards

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but
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 decline your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of providing accommodation. I am coming here with a Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).friend, and
friend and
 we have decided to share the cost of accommodation. I will go to Rome on 30th April. We will rent a hotel there to rest for the night. I plan to stay here for a week. The first
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place
 I decided to visit was the Colosseum, next
 I would visit museums and art galleries. The Pantheon, known as the temple of all the gods, is the most outstanding structure in the history of ancient Rome and the whole world. That's why I can't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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but
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come
 here. And of course
 food is an indispensable thing in this trip, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I will go to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
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places
 to eat. I'm This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited about this trip, and I'd This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you and invite you to eat with me. I hope you can suggest me more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
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places
 to eat and drink and other attractive tourist You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodpointhousesitecommunityseat
places
 that you feel I should go to. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to meeting you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Best Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphregards.regards!regards?regards:regards,regards;
regards