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semi formal letter to thank you

semi formal letter to thank you YmRYr
Dear Mr Jackson, I am writing to thank you for your offer but I would politely decline your help of providing accommodation. I am coming here with a friend and we have decided to share the cost of accommodation. I will go to Rome on 30th April. We will rent a hotel there to rest for the night. I plan to stay here for a week. The first place I decided to visit was the Colosseum, next I would visit museums and art galleries. The Pantheon, known as the temple of all the gods, is the most outstanding structure in the history of ancient Rome and the whole world. That's why I can't help but come here. And of course food is an indispensable thing in this trip, so I will go to famous places to eat. I'm very excited about this trip, and I'd love to meet you and invite you to eat with me. I hope you can suggest me more famous places to eat and drink and other attractive tourist places that you feel I should go to. I look forward to meeting you soon. Best regards
Dear Mr Jackson, I am writing to thank you for your offer
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but
I would
politely
decline your
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help
of providing accommodation. I am coming here with a
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
friend and
we have decided to share the cost of accommodation. I will go to Rome on 30th April. We will rent a hotel there to rest for the night. I plan to stay here for a week. The
first
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place
I decided to visit was the Colosseum,
next
I would visit museums and art galleries. The Pantheon, known as the temple of all the gods, is the most outstanding structure in the history of ancient Rome and the whole world. That's why I can't
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help
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but
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come
here. And
of course
food is an indispensable thing in this trip,
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so
I will go to
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famous
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places
to eat. I'm
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very
excited about this trip, and I'd
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love
to
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meet
you and invite you to eat with me. I hope you can suggest me more
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famous
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places
to eat and drink and other attractive tourist
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places
that you feel I should go to.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to meeting you
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soon
. Best
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
regards

IELTS letter semi formal letter to thank you

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
189 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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