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Application letter of the hotel manager

Application letter of the hotel manager LqLmR

Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to apply for the position mentioned in your advertisement for the part time job during the summer holidays. I am 24 years old and I am a student of the University. I study as a manager. I would like to enrich my qualification in my future job. Last year I worked as a worker at the restaurant. So I had some experience about the work. I am sociable and responsible. Besides I can speak two languages english and russian. If my application has convinced you of my ability, I should welcome the opportunity to talk with you so that you may call my telephone number is 998937843412. Yours Sincerly,

Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to apply for the position mentioned in your advertisement for the This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 job during the summer holidays. I am 24 years Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).old, and
old and
 I am a student of the University. I study as a manager. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to enrich my qualification in my future job. Last year I worked as a worker at the restaurant. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 experience about the work. I am sociable and responsible. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Besides,
Besides
 I can speak two languages Possible spelling mistake found.English
english
 and Possible spelling mistake found.RussianRussiaPrussianRussians
russian
. If my application has convinced you of my ability, I should welcome the opportunity to talk with you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that you may call my telephone number is 998937843412. Yours Possible spelling mistake found.Sincerely
Sincerly
, 

IELTS letter Application letter of the hotel manager

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

116 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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