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I am writing to apply for the Journalism Foundation course offered by your for the academic year beginning 2022 .

I am writing to apply for the Journalism Foundation course offered by your for the academic year beginning 2022. 52Bnm

I am a 18 -year-old Uzbek citizen, currently living in Uzbekistan. Through this letter, I would extend my interest in the training program which is being conducted in your reputed organization Journalism course. I am Stephanie and I am currently studying in school. I have been studying English since the age of 12 and have recently obtained a grade B in English Examination. I got to know that your organization is organizing a training session for second special interest. I would like to inform you that I am willing to join the training program. I shall be highly obliged if you could approve my request and allow me attend the training. Please find enclosed a copy of my CV, giving further details of my educational qualifications and work experience, I hope you will consider my application and I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely. Kate.

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got
 to know that your organization is organizing a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinstructionworkoutpracticeschoolingdrill
training
 session for second special interest. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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join
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinstructionworkoutpracticeschoolingdrill
training
 program. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 obliged if you could approve my request and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
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attend
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training
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of my educational qualifications and work experience, I hope you will consider my application and I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Yours sincerely
. Kate. 