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Write a letter to an employment agency.

Write a letter to an employment agency. WyPQ0

Dear Sir, MadamI am writing this letter to your agency about job. I am studying at the University and I am twenty two years old. I am studying for a Master degree at the University where have been for the last three years. I am looking for a part time job and I wonder if you can help me. Probably, I would like an office job, perhaps working as a secretary office administrator or typist. I can only work during the afternoon and at weekends. I would be ready to start immediately. Besides this job I can speak French and German fluently and I have been learning English language for the past three years. While I studied for my degree, I worked as a part time office manager for an import export firm in Tashkent. I recent years I have also had temporary summer jobs as a hotel receptionist in Tashkent. I am looking forward to hearing from youYours faithfully

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