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Requesting letter to a Korean tutor.

Requesting letter to a Korean tutor. 3xOol
Dear mrs LiI am writing to inquire about attending in your Korean lessons. Two days ago, when I was watching TV and I came across your advert which is regarding teaching Korean language extensively. I am particularly keen to learn from a native speaker like yourself so I do hope that you have space in your timetable to fit me in for some lessons. My reason for wanting to learn your language is because I won a lottery for working and studying in your original country. That is why I looking for a tutor currently. I would be grateful if you could send me further information regarding the lessons. Firstly I would like to know how can I learn it during six months perfectly. In my mind it is a bit more difficult but you claimed. I also require information on the cost of the course and when it will commence. I look forward to receiving details. Thank you in advance for your help. Yours sincerely Selena Gomez.
Dear
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mrs
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LiI
Did you mean "am I"?
am
writing to inquire about attending in your Korean lessons.

Two days ago, when I was watching TV and I came across your advert which is regarding teaching Korean language
extensively
. I am
particularly
keen to learn from a native speaker like yourself
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I do hope that you have space in your timetable to fit me in for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
lessons.

My reason for wanting to learn your language is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I won a lottery for working and studying in your original country.
That is
why
Did you mean "I'm looking", "I am looking", or "I was looking"?
I looking
for a tutor
currently
.

I would be grateful if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me
further
information regarding the lessons.
Firstly
I would like to know how can I learn it during six months
perfectly
. In my mind it is a bit more difficult
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
you claimed.

I
also
require information on the cost of the course and when it will commence.

I look forward to receiving
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
. Thank you in advance for your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
. Yours
sincerely
Selena Gomez.
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IELTS letter Requesting letter to a Korean tutor.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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