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request letter write to the dean of derpartment to suggest a chage of the time because the english derpartment has decied to hold a speech contest in late december . you should write at least 150 word

request letter write to the dean of derpartment to suggest a chage of the time because the english derpartment has decied to hold a speech contest in late december. you should write at least 150 word n1apE
we are sutdent of class 12z7. we are please and happy about the department is to hold and endlish speech contest. we are sure it is of great help to our oral enflish and all of us want to take part in it we have noticed that the time of the contest is on 27th of december. but it will have troubles with us that the time of the contest. as you know according to the school schedelu of this t erm, the final examination is te begin on january, 10th. we all wish to do excellently in both but we are afraid that it will be very difficult because we have to prepare for the examination and the contest at the same time. hence, w would spend less time on the preparatiom of the contest considering the outcome of the contest we suggest that is the postpond the next term, preferably is the fisrtly few week. generally speaking, we have more free time in that period of time thank you for your attention your faithfully
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we
are
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sutdent
of
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class
12z7.
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we
are
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please
and happy about the department is to hold and
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endlish
speech
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contest
.
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we
are sure it is of great
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help
to our oral
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enflish
and all of us want to
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take part
in
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it


we have noticed that the
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time
of the
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contest
is on 27th of
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december
.
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but
it will have troubles with us that the
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time
of the
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contest
.
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as
you know according to the school
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schedelu
of this
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t erm
, the final examination is
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te
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begin
on
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january
, 10th.
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we
all wish to do
excellently
in both
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but
we are afraid that it will be
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very
difficult
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because
we
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have to
prepare for the examination and the
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contest
at the same
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time
.
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hence
, w would spend less
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time
on the
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preparatiom
of the contest

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considering
the outcome of the
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contest
we suggest
that is
the
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postpond
the
next
term,
preferably
is the
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fisrtly
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few week
.
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generally
speaking, we have more free
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time
in that period of time

thank you for your attention

your
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faithfully
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IELTS letter request letter write to the dean of derpartment to suggest a chage of the time because the english derpartment has decied to hold a speech contest in late december. you should write at least 150 word

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  American English
2 paragraphs
175 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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