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A friend of yours has written to you, asking for some advice. He wants to visit your country for three weeks this summer and would like to know which places to visit, where to stay, what sights to see, and what clothes to bring. Write to him, giving as many suggestions as you can and mentioning any national customs that may seem strange to him. (about 200 words)

A friend of yours has written to you, asking for some advice. He wants to visit your country for three weeks this summer and would like to know which places to visit, where to stay, what sights to see, and what clothes to bring. Write to him, giving as many suggestions as you can and mentioning any national customs that may seem strange to him. (about 200 words) Rw9EG
Vietnam, July, 2th, 2019 Dear Junho, I was so delighted to receive your letter and know that you and your friends will spend your three week- trip in Vietnam. I cannot wait to pick you up at the airport! Maybe this is your first journey to Vietnam, I promise that you will enjoy your trip and have lots of special memories. After arriving in Hanoi, you can spend a day or two days in our capital to tour there. Here, you should visit Uncle Ho’s mausoleum or Long Bien steppe you and your friends can take many beautiful pictures. All of you can also go to Van Phuc silk village if you all want to know one of many craft villages in Vietnam. In the other day, I hope you can travel Da Nang because I and my family will go there for our summer holiday. If you can go, we may have a short trip together. In Da Nang, we would like you to spend a full day in Ba Na hills to play all the games there and have such wonderful pictures. There, we can get to the dragon bridge, it is the must see for all lovers of architecture. In a fixed time, the dragon offers a dazzling display of lights, fire, and water, we are sure that no first-time visitor to Da Nang should miss out on. In addition to these places, you can visit more such as: Nha Trang city, Ho Chi Minh city, and more. Looking forward to seeing you in Vietnam soon. Best wishes, Nguyen.
Vietnam, July,
2th
, 2019

Dear
Junho
,

I was
so
delighted to receive your letter and know that you and your friends will spend your three week- trip in Vietnam. I cannot wait to pick you up at the airport!

Maybe this is your
first
journey to Vietnam, I promise that you will enjoy your trip and have lots of special memories. After arriving in Hanoi, you can spend a day or two days in our capital to tour there. Here, you should visit Uncle Ho’s mausoleum or Long
Bien
steppe you and your friends can take
many
beautiful
pictures. All of you can
also
go to Van
Phuc
silk village if you all want to know one of
many
craft villages in Vietnam. In the other day, I hope you can travel
Da
Nang
because
I and my family will go there for our summer holiday. If you can go, we may have a short trip together. In
Da
Nang
, we would like you to spend a full day in Ba Na hills to play all the games there and have such wonderful pictures. There, we can
get
to the dragon bridge, it is the
must
see
for all lovers of architecture. In a
fixed
time, the dragon offers a dazzling display of lights, fire, and water, we are sure that no
first
-time visitor to
Da
Nang
should miss out on.

In addition
to these places, you can visit more such as:
Nha
Trang
city,
Ho Chi Minh city
, and more.

Looking forward to seeing you in Vietnam
soon
.

Best wishes,

Nguyen.
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IELTS letter A friend of yours has written to you, asking for some advice. He wants to visit your country for three weeks this summer and would like to know which places to visit, where to stay, what sights to see, and what clothes to bring. Write to him, giving as many suggestions as you can and mentioning any national customs that may seem strange to him. (about 200 words)

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