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invitation someone to come your party

invitation someone to come your party 86Nnm
Dear Sammy, Saturday in this weekend, are you free? At 8. 00pm, I organization a pijama party in my garden. I want to invite you to come and enjoy with us. I’m planning a plan for that day, i will prepare some food, wine, candle, some fun games and some horror films, I think it will be interesting, I am so excited right now. When you come, don’t bring any present because you are my present. You can go with your boyfriend or someone close to you. I think it is a overnight party, so you and your friend can overnight in my house. It’ll great to see you. If you come, reply my email. Love you,
Dear Sammy, Saturday in this weekend, are you free? At 8. 00pm,
I organization
a
pijama
party in my garden. I want to invite you to
come
and enjoy with us. I’m planning a plan for that day,
i
will prepare
some
food, wine, candle,
some
fun games and
some
horror films, I
think
it will be interesting, I am
so
excited right
now
. When you
come
, don’t bring any present
because
you are my present. You can
go with
your boyfriend or someone close to you. I
think
it is
a
overnight party,
so
you and your friend can overnight in my
house
. It’ll great to
see
you. If you
come
, reply my email.
Love
you,
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IELTS letter invitation someone to come your party

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
117 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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