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invitation someone to come your party

invitation someone to come your party 86Nnm

Dear Sammy, Saturday in this weekend, are you free? At 8. 00pm, I organization a pijama party in my garden. I want to invite you to come and enjoy with us. I’m planning a plan for that day, i will prepare some food, wine, candle, some fun games and some horror films, I think it will be interesting, I am so excited right now. When you come, don’t bring any present because you are my present. You can go with your boyfriend or someone close to you. I think it is a overnight party, so you and your friend can overnight in my house. It’ll great to see you. If you come, reply my email. Love you,

Dear Sammy, Saturday in this weekend, are you free? At 8. 00pm, Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'I'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
I organization
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pijama
 party in my garden. I want to invite you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 and enjoy with us. I’m planning a plan for that day, Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will prepare This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 food, wine, candle, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 fun games and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 horror films, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it will be interesting, I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 excited right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. When you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
, don’t bring any present This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 you are my present. You can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompany
go with
 your boyfriend or someone close to you. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 overnight party, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you and your friend can overnight in my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. It’ll great to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you. If you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
, reply my email. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
 you, 