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You recently sent your computer to be repaired at a shop. However, you are not satisfied with the repair. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter

You recently sent your computer to be repaired at a shop. However, you are not satisfied with the repair. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. In your letter raxKo

I am writing this epistle that i am very much unsatisfied with the service, as still facing same issues as previously it was. Let me explain my situation to you, 2 weeks ago, i came to your service center shop to repairing my computer screen and CPU body. I shared the reason that, by mistake it was felt by my wife. Then next day i came to your shop and one of your team member John smith had told me that it would take about a week to to restore completely. Although, I was very happy that your customer care team call me especially that my computer issue has been resolved, but just after 2 days i saw that the screen and Body has some cracks on it. I called your team but no response and nobody is picking my call. Another day, i talked to your service team to repair it again or reimburse the amount; But they denied as it was against their policy as i need to pay again. Your repair is very reputed and Heard very good reviews from my friends, but i am not very much satisfied with the response from your repair and customer service team. Kindly look into the issue or Refund my money back. Awaiting for your positive response Your Faithfully Jony Cater

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Kindly look into the issue or Refund my money back.

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positive
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Your Faithfully


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