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Application for a job when you saw advertised in newspaper

Application for a job when you saw advertised in newspaper 2KBwk

Dear Madam I am writing to apply for a job an teacher at your school which I saw advertised in "Today's"newspaper. I am fourthy years old and I feel I have many of the important qualification needed for this job. I am presently working as a library assistant. I have been for the last ten years. In addition to this, I participate in information technology course. I am proactive employee. I enjoy several outdoors activities such as planting flowers, gardening, cooking and swimming. I am sociable and I get on well with new people easily. I am enthusiastic and energetic employee and I feel that I am well qualifiedfor this job. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfullyAnorboyeva Diyora.

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 am enthusiastic and energetic employee and I feel that I am well Possible spelling mistake found.qualified for
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soon
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faithfullyAnorboyeva
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