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Request letter for English course center

Request letter for English course center Ogxx3
Dear Sir or MadamI am writing letter to inquire about the English course center. I am a new English leaner. I have resided far from center of city. However, I would like to learn English at your course. I was informed about your course to be the nearest course center and assist me to request more information about it. Firstly, i wonder if you could give me your course's timetable. It would be interesting to know about qualification of teachers and personal sessions. Secondly, i would be interested to know what kind of books or dates they will utilize for us to improve our learning English. Your faithfully, Umida
Dear Sir or
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MadamI
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am
writing letter to inquire about the English
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course
center. I am a new English leaner. I have resided far from center of city.
However
, I would like to learn English at your
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course
. I
was informed
about your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
to be the nearest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
center and assist me to request more information about it.
Firstly
,
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i
wonder if you could give me your course's timetable. It would be interesting to know about qualification of teachers and personal sessions.
Secondly
,
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i
would
be interested
to know what kind of books or dates they will utilize for us to
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improve
our learning English.
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Your
faithfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Umida

IELTS letter Request letter for English course center

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
108 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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