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On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. 7mo6
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to inform you that I recently lost my digital camera while on holiday in Vietnam. The camera is a black Canon 70d and cost $1550 when I bought it new last month. It has a resolution of 20 megapixels, a Canon 67 millimeter lens and was in a brown leather case with my name on it. I lost it when I was having coffee with my husband in the backpacker area of Ho Chi Minh City. I believe the coffee shop was called Highlands Coffee and it was on Pham Ngu Lao Street. We had been at the coffee shop for around 45 minutes when I noticed it was missing. I am entitled to make a claim for the value of the above mentioned item and request that you send me details on what I need to do in order to proceed. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully John Smith
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to inform you that I recently lost my digital camera while on holiday in Vietnam.

The camera is a black Canon 70d and cost $1550 when I
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bought
it new last month. It has a resolution of 20 megapixels, a Canon 67 millimeter lens and was in a brown leather case with my name on it.

I lost it when I was having
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coffee
with my husband in the backpacker area of Ho Chi Minh City. I believe the
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coffee
shop
was called
Highlands
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Coffee
and it was on
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Pham
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Ngu
Lao Street. We had been at the
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coffee
shop for around 45 minutes when I noticed it was missing.

I
am entitled
to
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make
a claim for the value of the above mentioned item and request that you
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send
me
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details
on what I need to do in order to proceed.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully


John Smith
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IELTS letter On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

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161 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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