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You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. Explain what the favor was. Describe how this favor helped you. Offer compensation.

You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. Explain what the favor was. Describe how this favor helped you. Offer compensation. 2kMx
Dear Sona, I hope you are doing great and I'm really sorry for the delay in reaching out to you. I'm extremely happy for the help that you did during my absence. Even though the long holidays were not preplanned, I could transfer all my work to you before the departure. As you know our team is getting many short noticed projects that are really important for the clients as well as to our company, your involvement in the project is really appreciable. Especially the Capstone project which is very complex and fast pace, you could complete that on time. Mostly those projects are hard to model as well as estimate but you could manage it really well. The client was really happy about the work and they appreciated the effort done by the team, especially because they could get the model on time and they started the work as per the schedule. Because of the timely submission and quality, my Outlook was flooded with appreciations and similar task requests. I'm extremely happy about the support and to celebrate this I will take you to your favorite Chinese restaurant at Chennai. Definitely I will also do your work when you are on leave but for my satisfaction I will take you to your most-liked place. Waiting eagerly for you to have fun together! Best Regards, Riya
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Sona
, I hope you are doing great and I'm
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really
sorry for the delay in reaching out to you. I'm
extremely
happy for the
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help
that you did during my absence.

Even though
the long holidays were not
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preplanned
, I could transfer all my
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work
to you
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before
the departure. As you know our team is getting
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many
short noticed
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projects
that are
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really
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important
for the clients
as well
as to our
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company
, your involvement in the
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project
is
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really
appreciable.
Especially
the Capstone
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project
which is
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very
complex and
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fast
pace, you could complete that on time.
Mostly
those
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projects
are
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hard
to model
as well
as estimate
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but
you could manage it
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really
well. The client was
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really
happy about the
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work and
they appreciated the effort done by the team,
especially
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because
they could
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get
the model on
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time and
they
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started
the
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work
as per the schedule.
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Because
of the timely submission and quality, my Outlook
was flooded
with appreciations and similar task requests.

I'm
extremely
happy about the support and to celebrate this I will take you to your favorite Chinese restaurant at Chennai. Definitely I will
also
do your
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work
when you are on
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leave
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but
for my satisfaction I will take you to your most-liked place.

Waiting
eagerly
for you to have fun together!

Best Regards,
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Riya
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IELTS letter You recently took a long vacation. In your absence, a friend did you a huge favor. Write a letter thanking your friend. Explain what the favor was. Describe how this favor helped you. Offer compensation.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
225 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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