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Rented a car and accident happened

Rented a car and accident happened KMBL

Dear $ir, I am smith litt- your recent client. I hired a car from your city center car rental branch. On 23 Nov at 12 p. m. , the model is Toyota, colour is black and car number MH34566. Well, I liked to inform you that I had an unfortunate unavoidable accident last night when I drew a car on my way from Mumbai to Pune. One bike rider hit the car from back when it was parked. It was totally his fault because he rode a bike on high speed which is not acceptable as per traffic rule. I filed a complaint against him to the local police stations and results was in my favour. He found guilty and ready to pay to the bills for all the damage he made. I would like to request you to please send me the another car, as I need to finish my work form which hired a car at first place. I believe you can understand my trouble. Please consider this mail urgent request because I have some unfinished business to finish which impossible with getting the new car to travel. Yours Sincerely,

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 number MH34566.

Well, I liked to inform you that I had an unfortunate unavoidable accident last night when I drew a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 on my way from Mumbai to Pune. One bike rider hit the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 from back when it was parked
. It was totally
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. I filed a complaint against him to the local police stations and results was in my Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
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. He found guilty and ready to pay to the bills for all the damage he made.

I would like to request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
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send
 me the another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
, as I need to finish my work form which hired a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 at first
 place. I believe you can understand my trouble. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 consider this mail urgent request This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 unfinished business to finish which impossible with getting the new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 to travel.

Yours Sincerely
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