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Dear Linh, How have you been? I received your email yesterday. I hear that you and your family plan to travel to Ha Noi the next weekend. Now I am writing to tell you about my plan for the next weekend. I'm going to Da Lat with my family the next weekend. As you see, I had to wait for this moment a long time ago. My dream finally has come true, and we are planning to prepare some foods and items to take on the road. If I go to Da Lat, I will go to see Valley of love. I hear that the Valley of love is a picturesque valley of rolling hills with a lake as its centerpiece, serving as a romantic getaway for locals and tourists. Like me, I'm sure you also look forward to one day going to Da Lat to see the poetic landscape there. How about your vacation? Did you have fun with your family? I look forward to hearing from you soon! Your friend, Khang.
Dear
Linh
,

How have you been? I received your email yesterday. I hear that you and your family plan to travel to Ha
Noi
the
next
weekend.
Now
I am writing to
tell
you about my plan for the
next
weekend.

I'm going to
Da
Lat with my family the
next
weekend. As you
see
, I had to wait for this moment a long time ago. My dream
finally
has
come
true, and we are planning to prepare
some
foods and items to take on the road. If I go to
Da
Lat, I will go to
see
Valley of
love
. I hear that the Valley of
love
is a picturesque valley of rolling hills with a lake as its centerpiece, serving as a romantic getaway for locals and tourists. Like me, I'm sure you
also
look forward to one day going to
Da
Lat to
see
the poetic landscape there.

How about your vacation? Did you have fun with your family? I look forward to hearing from you
soon
!

Your friend,

Khang
.
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IELTS letter relate to an assessment of the overall clarity and development of the argument

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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