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Regarding the request of the suitable holiday apartment for rent.

Regarding the request of the suitable holiday apartment for rent. pJJ32
To, The Manager XYZ Travel Agency Singapore Dear Sir/Madam, Subject: Regarding the request of the suitable holiday apartment for rent. This is Sandeep, from Hyderabad India. I am planning a short holiday trip along with my friends to Singapore in the mid of August. Regarding which I am in need of a holiday apartment with basic amenities that would suit 5 people comfortably. Here I am describing the basic requirements of the apartment for your reference. A 2/3/4 bedroom apartment with 5 beds or more along with either semi-furnished or fully-furnished is appreciable. We prefer a place to be central, and should have food restaurants and other groceries a step away. A total of 5 we are, planning to stay 10 days from 19-August-21 morning to 29-August-21 morning in Singapore. So, considering the above requirements, requesting you to find the best suitable list of places for us. Detailed price break-up of each apartment will be appreciable and it would be great if you send a list by end of July-21, so that it becomes easy for us to choose one for our happy holidays in Singapore. Yours Faithfully, Sandeep
To,

The Manager

XYZ Travel Agency

Singapore

Dear Sir/Madam,

Subject: Regarding the request of the suitable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
holiday
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartment
for rent.

This is Sandeep, from Hyderabad India. I am planning a short
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
holiday
trip along with my friends to Singapore in the mid of August.

Regarding which I am in need of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
holiday
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartment
with basic amenities that would suit 5
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
comfortably
.

Here I am describing the basic requirements of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartment
for your reference.

A 2/3/
It appears that a hyphen is missing.
4 bedroom
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartment
with 5 beds or more along with either semi-furnished or
fully
-furnished is appreciable.

We prefer a place to be central, and should have food restaurants and other groceries a step away.

A total of 5 we are, planning to stay 10 days from 19-August-21 morning to 29-August-21 morning in Singapore.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, considering the above requirements, requesting you to find the best suitable list of places for us.

Detailed price break-up of each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
apartment
will be appreciable and it would be great if you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
a list by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of July-21,

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that it becomes easy for us to choose one for our happy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
holidays
in Singapore.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Sandeep
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IELTS letter Regarding the request of the suitable holiday apartment for rent.

Letter
  American English
15 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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