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You are a university student and you got an assignment from your professor at university. You need to write an article about ‘European Society in the Twentieth Century’ in two weeks. You look in the local library but can't find a satisfying source. But you have a relative who is very knowledgeable about this subject. So you are writing a letter to your relative for help.

You are a university student and you got an assignment from your professor at university. You need to write an article about ‘European Society in the Twentieth Century’ in two weeks. You look in the local library but can't find a satisfying source. But you have a relative who is very knowledgeable about this subject. So you are writing a letter to your relative for help. r8pXJ
I am writing to you because I need help with an assignment I received from my professor at the university. It is about ‘European Society in the Twentieth Century' and I looked at my local library but couldn’t find a satisfying source. Then you came to my mind. I know you are knowledgeable about this subject. That’s why I write you. Everything I found about the subject was about Second World War and its effects on people. But I want something more about the cultural side of society. How was their culture before the twentieth century and what changed in the twentieth century? About the new generation born during this time. How did they perceive the rapidly changing world around them? These are the questions I want to be answered. I know you are busy and you are working but this will help me greatly. If you can answer these questions for me I will be very grateful. I hope I am not imposing on you so much. Hope to hear from you soon. I am writing to you because I need help with an assignment I received from my professor at the university. It is about ‘European Society in the Twentieth Century' and I looked at my local library but couldn’t find a satisfying source. Then you came to my mind. I know you are knowledgeable about this subject. That’s why I write you. Everything I found about the subject was about Second World War and its effects on people. But I want something more about the cultural side of society. How was their culture before the twentieth century and what changed in the twentieth century? About the new generation born during this time. How did they perceive the rapidly changing world around them? These are the questions I want to be answered. I know you are busy and you are working but this will help me greatly. If you can answer these questions for me I will be very grateful. I hope I am not imposing on you so much. Hope to hear from you soon.
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with an assignment I received from my professor at the university. It is about ‘European
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Society
in the Twentieth Century' and I looked at my local library
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but
couldn’t find a satisfying source. Then you came to my mind. I
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War and its effects on
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people
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want
something more about the cultural side of
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society
. How was their culture
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before
the twentieth century and what
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changed
in the twentieth century? About the new generation born during this time. How did they perceive the
rapidly
changing
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world
around them? These are the
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questions
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to hear from you
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. I am writing to you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I need
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
with an assignment I received from my professor at the university. It is about ‘European
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Society
in the Twentieth Century' and I looked at my local library
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
couldn’t find a satisfying source. Then you came to my mind. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
you are knowledgeable about this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subject
. That’s why I write you. Everything I found about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subject
was about Second
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
World
War and its effects on
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
something more about the cultural side of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
. How was their culture
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the twentieth century and what
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
in the twentieth century? About the new generation born during this time. How did they perceive the
rapidly
changing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
around them? These are the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
questions
I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to
be answered
. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
you are busy and you are working
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
this will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
help
me
greatly
. If you can answer these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
questions
for me I will be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
grateful. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hope
I am not imposing on you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Hope
to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

IELTS letter You are a university student and you got an assignment from your professor at university. You need to write an article about ‘European Society in the Twentieth Century’ in two weeks. You look in the local library but can't find a satisfying source. But you have a relative who is very knowledgeable about this subject. So you are writing a letter to your relative for help.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
348 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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