Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Writing a letter for help

Writing a letter for help MM7Le

I am writing to you because I need help with an assignment I received from my professor at the university. It is about ‘European Society in the Twentieth Century' and I looked at my local library but couldn’t find a satisfying source. Then you came to my mind. I know you are knowledgeable about this subject. That’s why I write you. Everything I found about the subject was about Second World War and its effects on people. But I want something more about the cultural side of society. How was their culture before the twentieth century and what changed in the twentieth century? About the new generation born during this time. How did they perceive the rapidly changing world around them? These are the questions I want to be answered. I know you are busy and you are working but this will help me greatly. If you can answer these questions for me I will be very grateful. I hope I am not imposing on you so much. Hope to hear from you soon.

I am writing to you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I need This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 with an assignment I received from my professor at the university. It is about ‘European Society in the Twentieth Century' and I looked at my local library This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 couldn’t find a satisfying source. Then you came to my mind. I know you are knowledgeable about this subject. That’s why I write you. Everything I found about the subject was about Second World War and its effects on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I want something more about the cultural side of society. How was their culture This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the twentieth century and what This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 in the twentieth century? About the new generation born during this time. How did they perceive the rapidly
 changing world around them? These are the questions I want to be answered
. I know you are busy and you are working This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me greatly
. If you can answer these questions for me I will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 grateful. I hope I am not imposing on you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much. Hope to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. 