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Goods are delivered to wrong adress

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my complaint about the delivery service of your company. Recently I have become a client of your online shop. On May 17th in the morning I made an order a great deal of food for the same day's evening party. On account of laying the table beforehand I was worried about wating the groceries. It was nearly 12 p. m I called the shop again. Unfortunately, they sent my goods to the wrong address. I got so disstressed owing to your irresponsible employees. It was a pity fact when my order was brought in the afternoon at 2 p. m. , there was not any bread and drinks. My dissatisfaction to your company got arosen. All my stress and worry I strongly ask for a compensation. Moreover, I hope you should reprimend your awkward workers on behalf of not to lose the regular customers of the shop. I do believe you will draw your urgent attention to resolve without taking legal actions. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Faithfully, Mekhriban Bayimbetova.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my complaint about the delivery service of your
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company
. Recently I have become a client of your online shop. On May 17th in the morning I made an order a great deal of food for the same day's evening party. On account of laying the table beforehand I
was worried
about
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wating
the groceries. It was
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12 p. m I called the shop again. Unfortunately, they
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sent
my
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goods
to the
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wrong
address. I
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disstressed
owing to your irresponsible employees. It was a pity fact when my order
was brought
in the afternoon at 2 p. m.
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,
there was not any bread and drinks. My dissatisfaction to your
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company
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got
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arosen
. All my
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stress
and worry I
strongly
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ask for
a compensation.
Moreover
, I hope you should
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reprimend
your awkward workers on behalf of not to lose the regular customers of the shop. I do believe you will draw your urgent attention to resolve without taking legal actions. I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.
Faithfully
,
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Mekhriban
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Bayimbetova
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IELTS letter Goods are delivered to wrong adress

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
182 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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