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Recommenadtion letter at shoreditch

Recommenadtion letter at shoreditch W51N0
As the Chief Operating Officer of the Shoreditch, I am delighted to write this letter of recommendation in support of Miss. Tussipova Aizhan and to be able to attest to the character and attributes of her personality. I had the opportunity to work with and supervise Miss. Tussipova Aizhan, working as the hostess during summer holidays (2 months). As employee with no work experience in catering, she showed herself as a decent worker that capable of stay resilient under conditions of stress from day one. Regarding objective assessment of her working capability, Miss. Tussipova Aizhan coped flawlessly on her own on the first day of work, considering the fact that the mentor who was supposed to train her got sick. Usually, each new intern is trained for 3 days in our restaurant, but Aizhan’s valued character traits such as curiosity, critical thinking, sociability and persistence served her well, so that she was hired on the first day. She demonstrated strong desire to gain more knowledge and it was great pleasure to coach such disciplined and intelligent individual. Working at the Land Rover Terrace at Shoreditch had a positive impact on her growth and nurtured her social and leadership skills while interacting with guests and cooperating with other colleagues, lefting an excellent first impression on our team. Miss. Tussipova Aizhan is always punctual and has no problem staying on duty untill all the work is done. Therefore, she will be a great benefit to her community and in every domain, where she would like to thrive and develop further. I would like to note that she is pretty enthusiastic to grab every opportunity with both hands and face more challenges, she can engage herself in. Voluntary dismissal of Miss. Tussipova Aizhan was due to her willing to concentrate all her attention on studying at Nazarbaev University. Unfortunately, it is difficult to loose such a valuable employee, but nevertheless we support her dedication to improve and develop in another area. I am undoubtedly confident that she will be proper addition wherever she goes.
As the Chief Operating Officer of the
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Shoreditch
, I
am delighted
to write this letter of recommendation in support of Miss.
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Tussipova
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Aizhan
and to be able to attest to the character and attributes of her personality. I had the opportunity to
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work
with and supervise Miss.
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Tussipova
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Aizhan
, working as the hostess during summer holidays (2 months). As employee with no
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work
experience in catering, she
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showed
herself as a decent worker that capable of stay resilient under conditions of
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stress
from day one.

Regarding objective assessment of her working capability, Miss.
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Tussipova
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Aizhan
coped
flawlessly
on her
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own
on the
first
day of
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work
, considering the fact that the mentor who
was supposed
to train her
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got
sick.
Usually
, each new intern
is trained
for 3 days in our restaurant,
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but
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Aizhan
’s valued character traits such as curiosity, critical thinking, sociability and persistence served her well,
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so
that she
was hired
on the
first
day. She demonstrated strong desire to gain more knowledge and it was great pleasure to coach such disciplined and intelligent individual.

Working at the Land Rover Terrace at
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Shoreditch
had a
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positive
impact on her growth and nurtured her social and leadership
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skills
while interacting with guests and cooperating with other colleagues,
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lefting
an excellent
first
impression on our team. Miss.
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Tussipova
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Aizhan
is always punctual and has no problem staying on duty
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untill
all the
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work
is done
.
Therefore
, she will be a great benefit to her community and in every domain, where she would like to thrive and develop
further
. I would like to note that she is pretty enthusiastic to grab every opportunity with both hands and face more challenges, she can engage herself in.

Voluntary dismissal of Miss.
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Tussipova
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Aizhan
was due to her willing to concentrate all her attention on studying at
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Nazarbaev
University. Unfortunately, it is difficult to
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loose
such a valuable employee,
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but
nevertheless
we support her dedication to
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improve
and develop in another area. I am
undoubtedly
confident that she will be proper addition wherever she goes.
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IELTS letter Recommenadtion letter at shoreditch

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
341 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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