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recently you stayed in hotel of large city

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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction in concern of service which I received from your precious hotel. When I started to live in the hotel, It made me happy because I ate delicious food, on the other hand, when I realized that AC instrument did not work properly in the same day, it made me frown because climate was scorch. Temperature was gone up around 43 degree, therefore Air conditioning should have worked accurately. I could not use Air conditioning, so I got fever in those periods. To commence with termination of this problem, I talked to a receptionist to solve this matter or change my room immediately, but she did not hear me because she had a lot of works. If she had concentrated on my problem, I would have used Air conditioning easily. Additionally, I discussed with another receptionist to change my room to get out of current room, however she said that all rooms were booked already. I would not do anything, therefore I had to stay my previous room which made me jeer totally. I would like you to take this matter seriously. Firstly, you should keep an eye on AC instruments and contact to electrician for repairing it. More than that, I would highly appreciate that if you could transfer fifty percentage refund to my account directly, it would be great to achieve the customer satisfaction because I had not been able to use the Air conditioning entire days. I am looking forward to replying from you. Yours faithfully, Vilas More
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction in concern of service which I received from your precious hotel. When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in the hotel, It made me happy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I ate delicious food,
on the other hand
, when I realized that AC instrument did not work
properly
in the same day, it made me frown
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
climate was scorch. Temperature
was gone
up around 43 degree,
therefore
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Air
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
conditioning
should have worked
accurately
. I could not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Air
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
conditioning
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
fever in those periods.

To commence with termination of this problem, I talked to a receptionist to solve this matter or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
immediately,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
she did not hear me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
she had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
works. If she had concentrated on my problem, I would have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Air
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
conditioning
easily
.
Additionally
, I discussed with another receptionist to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
out of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
,
however
she said that all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
were booked
already. I would not do anything,
therefore
I had to stay my previous
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
which made me jeer
totally
.

I would like you to take this matter
seriously
.
Firstly
, you should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
an eye on AC instruments and contact to electrician for repairing it. More than that, I would
highly
appreciate that if you could transfer fifty percentage refund to my account
directly
, it would be great to achieve the customer satisfaction
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I had not been able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Air
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
conditioning
entire days.

I am looking forward to replying from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

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IELTS letter recently you stayed in hotel of large city

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
260 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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