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Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this. oGQX
Dear Sir, I hope this letter will find you in the pink of your health. I am one of the customers of your newspaper and always get inspiration from the way you provide genuine and comprehensive information to your readers. in the newspaper of 18/2/2021 Sunday, I read an article related to an ancient city Mohanjodareo located northwest of Punjab, a province in Pakistan. The information mentioned was very amazing and it is impressed me a lot. As I am a history student and last week my teacher assigned me to work on a presentation on any old civilization. So, I decided to present on this city I started surfing the internet and consulted fee books of chronicles record. I became amazed when I compare the facts of tunneling and irrigation mentioned on other resources and given in your newspaper. There is a great contradiction between the two as your newspaper has mentioned that historical relics did not well support irrigation and only a few wells have been seen but the truth is they had proper channels and rivers for supporting their agriculture. I request you to re-edit the article and mentioned it again in the coming week newspaper because we considered your paper an authentic source. Hope you will pay consideration to this issue as it is a serious matter for your reputation. Sincerely, X. Y. Z.
Dear Sir, I hope this letter will find you in the pink of your health. I am one of the customers of your
newspaper
and always
get
inspiration from the way you provide genuine and comprehensive information to your readers.
in
the
newspaper
of 18/2/2021 Sunday, I read an article related to an ancient city
Mohanjodareo
located northwest of Punjab, a province in Pakistan. The information
mentioned
was
very
amazing and it
is impressed
me a lot. As I am a history student and last week my teacher assigned me to work on a presentation on any
old
civilization.
So
, I decided to present on this city I
started
surfing the internet and consulted fee books of chronicles record. I became amazed when I compare the facts of tunneling and irrigation
mentioned
on other resources and
given
in your
newspaper
. There is a great contradiction between the two as your
newspaper
has
mentioned
that historical relics did not well support irrigation and
only
a few wells have been
seen
but
the truth is they had proper channels and rivers for supporting their agriculture.

I request you to re-edit the article and
mentioned
it again in the coming week
newspaper
because
we considered your paper an authentic source. Hope you will pay consideration to this issue as it is a serious matter for your reputation.

Sincerely
, X. Y. Z.
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IELTS letter Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about this city/town what information was incorrect what the editor should do about this.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
228 words
5.5
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