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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come XxOg
Dear Rachael, I am Vikram Seth, your soon to be neighbor. I am writing this letter regarding the house warming party which is going to happen this weekend. I have recently moved into the city and have purchased the house next to yours. As part of my Indian tradition, i am holding a house warming party at my new house this Sunday. I request you to kindly bear with me for that day as there might be some noise disturbance. I will make sure that you and the other neighbors are least effected by noise of the party. I would also like to invite you to the party so that we can get to know each other. The party will commence at 9. 00 Am followed by food and drinks. Yours Sincerely, Vikram Seth
Dear Rachael,

I am
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Vikram
Seth, your
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soon
to be neighbor. I am writing this letter regarding the
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house warming
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party
which is going to happen this weekend.

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I
have recently
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moved
into the city and have
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purchased
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
next
to yours. As part of my Indian tradition,
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i
am holding a
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house warming
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party
at my new
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house
this Sunday. I request you to kindly bear with me for that day as there might be
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some
noise disturbance. I will
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make
sure that you and the other neighbors are least effected by noise of the party.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would
also
like to invite you to the
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party
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so
that we can
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get
to know each other. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
will commence at 9. 00
Am followed
by food and drinks.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Seth

IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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  American English
6 paragraphs
133 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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