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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come XxOg

Dear Rachael, I am Vikram Seth, your soon to be neighbor. I am writing this letter regarding the house warming party which is going to happen this weekend. I have recently moved into the city and have purchased the house next to yours. As part of my Indian tradition, i am holding a house warming party at my new house this Sunday. I request you to kindly bear with me for that day as there might be some noise disturbance. I will make sure that you and the other neighbors are least effected by noise of the party. I would also like to invite you to the party so that we can get to know each other. The party will commence at 9. 00 Am followed by food and drinks. Yours Sincerely, Vikram Seth

Dear Rachael,

I am Possible spelling mistake found.ViralHiramVRAMVikas
Vikram
 Seth, your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 to be neighbor. I am writing this letter regarding the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.house-warminghousewarming
house warming
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 which is going to happen this weekend.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 into the city and have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
next
 to yours. As part of my Indian tradition, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am holding a This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.house-warminghousewarming
house warming
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 at my new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 this Sunday. I request you to kindly bear with me for that day as there might be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 noise disturbance. I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure that you and the other neighbors are least effected by noise of the party.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would also
 like to invite you to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to know each other. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 will commence at 9. 00 Am followed
 by food and drinks.

Yours Sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.ViralHiramVRAMVikas
Vikram
 Seth