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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves? jqNa
Dear Mr. Redekop, This well-considered letter is to bring your attention to my request for a leave of absence for two weeks, starting Monday, March 20, so I can focus on the test for my Inter-immediate Accounting course. I have started my Accounting designation last year and the course has benefitted in a lot of improvements in my transaction recording technique. My recent course is at a higher level which enhances our accounts keeping, especially with our prepaid and accrued transactions. Due to the significance of the knowledge I need to master, I would like to ask for your kind permission to take one week off so I can properly prepare for the examination. As we are in our winter months, our operation is running at its minimum capacity. Also, Scott Bergen, my amazing colleague, has accepted to assist us with our daily tasks which require immediate attention. During my leave, I will check my email on the weekend to arrange tasks and responsibilities that need handling right after I return. I will also work with Mr. Bergen to ensure that all cheques and transactions will be properly recorded and settled by the first week I come back. The accounting course has provided me with an abundant amount of requirements and regulations for our system to be on-par with the Accounting Standard. This will benefit our company with strong reporting for our next audit as CRA tends to focus more on the flows of the money, especially when it relates to tax matters that resulted from expense reimbursements. Please seriously consider my request so immediate actions can be taken for my schedule. Kind regards,
Dear Mr.
Redekop
,

This well-considered letter is to bring your attention to my request for a
leave
of absence for two weeks, starting
Monday, March 20
,
so
I can focus on the
test
for my Inter-immediate
Accounting
course.

I have
started
my
Accounting
designation last year and the course has
benefitted
in
a lot of
improvements in my transaction recording technique. My recent course is at a higher level which enhances our accounts keeping,
especially
with our prepaid and accrued transactions. Due to the significance of the knowledge I need to master, I would like to
ask for
your kind permission to take one week off
so
I can
properly
prepare for the examination.

As we are in our winter months, our operation is running at its minimum capacity.
Also
, Scott Bergen, my amazing colleague, has
accepted
to assist us with our daily tasks which require immediate attention. During my
leave
, I will
check
my email on the weekend to arrange tasks and responsibilities that need handling right after I return. I will
also
work with Mr. Bergen to ensure that all
cheques
and transactions will be
properly
recorded and settled by the
first
week I
come
back.

The
accounting
course has provided me with an abundant amount of requirements and regulations for our system to be on-par with the
Accounting
Standard. This will benefit our
company
with strong reporting for our
next
audit as CRA tends to focus more on the flows of the money,
especially
when it relates to tax matters that resulted from expense reimbursements.

Please
seriously
consider my request
so
immediate actions can
be taken
for my schedule.

Kind regards,
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IELTS letter Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
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