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Dear Robert Hope you are doing well? I am doing fine too. Purpose of writing this letter is to let you know that, I want to sell my television. Yesterday, I bought a new television and want to sell the old one. I remember once you told me that, you were looking for a television and you like features of this television very much. So, if you didn't bought a new television yet, I can give you good deal. It is same as brand new, there is nothing wrong with it. As I told you earlier that, I bought a new one and it is the only reason to sell. As you are very fond of play station, it works really well with that because it have latest graphic card in it. Also, it have Netflix and OTT platforms. You can come anytime this weekend and pick it up. I am looking forward a response from you. Your regards Talwinder Singh

Dear Robert Hope you are doing well? I am doing fine too. Purpose of writing this letter is to let you know that, I want to sell my television. Yesterday, I bought a new television and want to sell the old one. I remember once you told me that, you were looking for a television and you like features of this television very much. So, if you didn't bought a new television yet, I can give you good deal. It is same as brand new, there is nothing wrong with it. As I told you earlier that, I bought a new one and it is the only reason to sell. As you are very fond of play station, it works really well with that because it have latest graphic card in it. Also, it have Netflix and OTT platforms. You can come anytime this weekend and pick it up. I am looking forward a response from you. Your regards Talwinder Singh V1eA
Dear Robert Hope you are doing well? I am doing fine too. Purpose of writing this letter is to let you know that, I want to sell my television. Yesterday, I bought a new television and want to sell the old one. I remember once you told me that, you were looking for a television and you like features of this television very much. So, if you didn't bought a new television yet, I can give you good deal. It is same as brand new, there is nothing wrong with it. As I told you earlier that, I bought a new one and it is the only reason to sell. As you are very fond of play station, it works really well with that because it have latest graphic card in it. Also, it have Netflix and OTT platforms. You can come anytime this weekend and pick it up. I am looking forward a response from you. Your regards Talwinder Singh
Dear Robert

Hope you are doing well?

I am doing fine too. Purpose of writing this letter is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that, I want to sell my television.

Yesterday, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
and want to sell the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
one.

I remember once you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that, you were looking for a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
and you like features of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
much.
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So
, if you didn't
The verb 'didn't' requires base form of this verb: "buy"
bought
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
yet
, I can give you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
deal. It is same as brand
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new
, there is nothing
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wrong
with it. As I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
you earlier that, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
one and it is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
reason to sell. As you are
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very
fond of play station, it works
really
well with that
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because
it
Did you mean "has"?
have
A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".
latest
graphic card in it.
Also
, it
Did you mean "has"?
have
Netflix and
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OTT
platforms.

You can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
anytime this weekend and pick it up. I am looking forward a response from you.

Your regards

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Talwinder
Singh
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IELTS letter Dear Robert Hope you are doing well? I am doing fine too. Purpose of writing this letter is to let you know that, I want to sell my television. Yesterday, I bought a new television and want to sell the old one. I remember once you told me that, you were looking for a television and you like features of this television very much. So, if you didn't bought a new television yet, I can give you good deal. It is same as brand new, there is nothing wrong with it. As I told you earlier that, I bought a new one and it is the only reason to sell. As you are very fond of play station, it works really well with that because it have latest graphic card in it. Also, it have Netflix and OTT platforms. You can come anytime this weekend and pick it up. I am looking forward a response from you. Your regards Talwinder Singh

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